2023年中考英语作文兴趣爱好.doc

2023中考英语作文：兴趣爱好 08 兴趣爱好篇 〔一〕 假设你是贝贝，你远在澳大利亚的笔友Andrew给你写了一封邮件，告诉了你关于他们读书周的事情，并想了解你的一些情况跟看法．请你根据他的提问，回复一封英文邮件． From：Andrew@Australia． com To：Beibei@Suzhou． com We will have a Reading Week next month． Every student should read a book and share it with others． I＇m not sure which book to read． I remember you like reading very much． Here are some questions I want to ask you． Can you tell me the reasons why reading is important？ How much time do you spend reading every day？ What kind of book do you like best？ Where do you get your books？ Can you tell me something about the book you＇ve read recently and what you have learned from the book？ I hope to hear from you soon． Yours． Andrew 注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥．使全文连贯、通顺． Dear Andrew， I＇m glad you will have a Reading Week． _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions． Best wishes. Beibei 【总分值范文】 Dear Andrew， I′m glad you will have a Reading Week． 〔引出话题〕I think reading is really important because it＇s really useful．【高分句型一】〔我的观点〕It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us relaxed．〔作用〕I usually read for an hour every day． I like reading novels best．高分句型二 And I often borrow books from the school library． 〔我的做法〕I have just finished a book about Robinson． It is a novel about how Robinson successfully survived after spending many years on a little island and finally went back to his family． From him， I learned that whatever we met， we should never give up．〔我朗读的书籍及给我的启示〕 I hope you will find my answers useful to you． Write to me any time if you have other questions．〔希望〕 〔二〕 为深入贯彻习近平总书记关于弘扬中华优秀传统文化的讲话精神，落实立德树人的根本任务，2023年7月15日定西市教育体育局与定西市语委办联合举办了首届定西中小学生诗词大会。大会的成功举办，在定西市再次掀起了“全民读书〞的热潮。请以“Grow up with reading〞为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，向中学生导报投稿，谈谈你对阅读的看法，并建议大家多读书，读好书。 要求: 1. 要点齐全，适当发挥； 2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写标准； 3. 词数:80-100词左右； 4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。 参考词汇:身心body and mind 【总分值范文】 Grow up with reading. Reading plays an important part in our life. First，reading can open up our eyes. The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. Second, reading can make us cleverer and happier. We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book. Everyone can become cleverer by reading. However, some students spend most of their time on Internet games instead of reading. As a result, they fall behind others in their schoolwork. This is harmful to them. I would like to suggest that all of us should do more reading. Let＇s grow up with reading! 【解析】 1.题干解读：该题目要求包含图片里的内容，写出阅读的重要作用，建议大家多读书，读好书等。可以分点写，有条理性。 2.例文点评：例文通过对图片里的内容，写出了阅读的重要作用，建议了大家多读书，读好书等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。 3.高分亮点：词组：plays an important part；open up；a healthy and happy life；become cleverer；instead of；As a result；fall behind等； 句型：Reading plays an important part in our life./The more we read, the more we know about the outside world. /We can live a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the book./As a result, they fall behind others in their schoolwork. 【点睛】 书面表达： 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如plays an important part；open up；a healthy and happy life；become cleverer；instead of；As a result；fall behind等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比拟等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 〔三〕 假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，得悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。 From: Harry@hotmail To: Lihua 2023@163 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun. What do you think of robots Do you want to have your own robot Why Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Harry 参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺本卷须知： 1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写标准； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Harry, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________