2023年中考英语作文,旅游交通.doc

2023中考英语作文：,旅游交通 10旅游交通篇 〔一〕 你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人，请你写一篇发言稿，在你校“英语时光〞播送中号召更多的同学参加。 要求： 1. 80—100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1. 活动缘由〔孤独、帮扶、游学……〕 2. 活动设想〔时间、地点、内容……〕 3. …… Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Mountain〞. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【写作思路】 这是一篇发言稿，也就是材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下在暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动的情况。目的是：号召更多的同学参加。主要从活动缘由〔孤独、帮扶、游学……〕；活动设想〔时间、地点、内容……〕和其他方面来介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，防止使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【总分值范文】 Hello, everybody. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a kid in the Mountains“. It will provide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the mountains. As many of their parents leave for the city to work, those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying. So we can bring them some school things like books and pens for their study, and prepare some interesting stories to share. In the daytime, we can go hiking and do some teamwork. In the evening, we can do such activities as popular games and group dance around the fire. Isn＇t that exciting Come and join us. Let＇s be “a kid in the mountains“.I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us. Thank you! 【名师点评】 〔1〕高分句型一 As many of their parents leave for the city to work，those students might feel lonely and some may even find it hard to go on studying.由于很多父母都去城市工作，这些学生可能会感到孤独，有些人甚至觉得很难继续学习。it hard to go on studying.中的it是形式宾语。 〔2〕高分句型二 I believe it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.我相信它会给山里的孩子们带来阳光，也会给我们带来更多的信心。句子it will bring sunshine to the children in the mountains as well as more confidence to us.是宾语从句。作believe的宾语。 〔二〕 丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。 活动内容： 1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念； 2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。 你的感想： 1．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助； 2．倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国； 3. ……〔考生自己发挥〕 要求： 1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。 2．所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。 3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 参考词汇：市民广场Civic Square In order to enrich Junior 3 students＇ after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】 这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；〔自己在发挥一些〕。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，防止使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【总分值范文】 In order to enrich Junior 3 students＇ after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People＇s Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country. 【名师点评】 【高分句型一】 I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了 would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。 【高分句型二】 In People＇s Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次清楚，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。 〔三〕 假设你是李华，你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线〞 (The Beautiful Yellow River Custom Touri