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2021 年 9 月 13 日【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】2021 年 9 月 14 日 2022 写作专项班授课笔记 手把手教你写出必备功能句【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的影响。移动电话给我们的生活产生了深远的影响。也可以这么说，智能手机对我们这一代人影响最大，它已经渗透到我们日常生活中。如果这些传统艺术失传，肯定会给中国的经济带来负面影响。【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】2022 写作专项班授课笔记 手把手教你写出必备功能句 观点句：1.对有影响 have an effect on sth exert an impact on sth effect|influence|impact 影响 时间产出最大化原则！正面|负面 好的|坏的|重要的|有害的 have a beneficial effect on sth 对某事有益 have a negative influence on|upon sth 对某事有负面的影响 have an important|vital effect on sth 对某事有重要的影响【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】have a harmful effect on sth 对某事有害 have a detrimental impact on sth 对某事有有害的影响 have a crippling effect on sth 对某事有极其严重的影响 花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。经常锻炼对一个人的身心健康有益处。增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的 影响。*花时间做某事有害处。have a negative impact on sth*花时间 spend timespend time doing sth cost time*上网 surf the internet*一个人的身心健康 ones physical and mental healthSpent too many time surf the internet have a negative impact on ones physical and mental health.F 错误：1.spend 改成 spending。动词原形，不能放在句首充当主语。动词原形，不具备名词性！所以，但凡，以后想要使用动作做主语的时候，统统换成 doing.Do 必死！换成 to do 可不可以？可以！2.surf 改成 surfing.【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】强调：一句话有且仅有一个谓语动词，并列和从句除外！spend time doing sth|3.have 改成 has|doing sth 做主语，谓语动词用单数 也可以 have 改成 may have 4.too many time 改成 too much timetime此处表示时间，不可数！Spending too many times surfing the internet.Spending too much time surfing the internet has a negative impact on ones physical and mental health.Costing too much time on the internet may have a harmful influence on ones physical and mental health.如何学习写作：原则：1.不是以句子为单位进行背诵2.一定是以意群为单位操作步骤：1.意群：*花太多时间做某事 spending too much time doing sth*对 xxx有害处 have a negative impact on xxx*一个人的身心健康 ones physical and mental health2.看着中文试图写英文句子 C-E3.自己尝试略微改动一下，写句子（不建议更改动词结构）花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】经常锻炼对一个人的身心健康有益处。增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的 影响。Regular exercise may have a beneficial effect on ones physical and mental health.花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。经常锻炼对一个人的身心健康有益处。增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的 影响。*have a positive influence on sth*增加高等教育的投资 increase the investment on high education高等教育 high education|tertiary education*国家的发展 one nations development|the development of one countrya/an one Increasing the investment on high education has a positive influence on one nations development.花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。经常锻炼对一个人的身心健康有益处。增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的 影响。*世界银行所做的研究表明 the research from the World Bank【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】research shows study shows study suggests According to the research from the World Bank,*GDP=Gross Domestic ProductionThe research from the World Bank shows that increase the investment on high education can havea positive influence on one nations GDP.*increase 改成 increasing|Do 必死The research from the World Bank shows that increasing the investment on high education can have a positive influence on one nations GDP.According to the research from the World Bank,increasing the investment on high education can have a positive influence on one nations GDP.陈述句！谁干什么！主部+述部 一切用法源于词性。一句话核心四大词性！位置 词性 写作，变成意群匹配的过程。Do 必死！作业：默写：花太多时间上网对一个人的身心健康有害处。经常锻炼对一个人的身心健康有益处。增加高等教育的投资，对国家的发展有积极的影响。世界银行所做的研究表明，增加高等教育的投资，会对一个国家的 GDP 产生积极的影响。练习：【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】这给世界上那些希望加快发展又希望保持自身独立性的国家和民族提供了全新的选择。2021 年 9 月 15日星期三 移动电话给我们的生活产生了深远的影响。*产生深远影响 exert|have a profound influence on sthaffect sth profoundly*我们的生活 our daily lifeA:our every day life B:our everyday life A:A;B:B;C:A+B;D:不知道！everyday adj every day n+adv【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】Mobile phones have exert profound impact on our daily life.F 这句话有错么？这句话有几个错误？错误：1.have exert 错误|do do必死，一句话有且仅有一个谓语动词，并列和从句除外；have exerted|have done 现在完成时 改成 have exerted 2.profound impact on sth 改成 a profound impact on sthMobile phones have exerted a profound impact on our daily life.Mobile phones have had a profound impact on our daily life.T have an effect on sth have had an effect on sth 也可以这么说，智能手机对我们这一代人影响最大，它已经渗透到我们日常生活中。*也可以这么而说 it could also be argued that*我们这一代人 our generation*已经渗透到我们的日常生活中 have already infiltrated into our everyday lifeinfiltrate 十岁原则 have already been a necessary part of our everyday life can be seen everywhere It could also be argued that the smart phones may have the largest impact on our generation,it has already been a necessary part of our everyday life.这句话有几个错误？A.1;B.2;C.3;D.不知道错误：1.逗号不能够连接两个句子。do do 必死！【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】2.it错误，不能够指代前面的 smart phonesit 改成 they It could also be argued that the smart phones may have the largest impact on our generation,and they have already been a necessary part of our everyday life.It could also be argued that the smart phones may have the largest impact on our generation,which has already been a necessary part of our everyday life.A:可以；B：不可以；C：不知道 This is Li Ming,I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks for what you have done for me.逗号，错误。改成“.”在英语中，标点符号也是语言准确的一个方面：1.“,”英语中，逗号不能够连接两个句子！2.英语中，没有英语中，书名，杂志名等，都用斜体！但是，手写的考试中，加引号！比如说：2046|2012|1921|“2046”“Harry Potter”拓展：1.ARE|Action Reasons Ends2.Details2008 E1|道歉+建议 51.Directions:You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】return to Bob,your landlord there.Write him a letter to 1)make an apology,and2)suggest a solution.如果这些传统艺术失传，肯定会给中国的经济带来负面影响。从句必有句，从句必有主句！*结构：if sv,sv.sv 代表完整的句子 s 主部 v 述部*传统艺术 traditional arts*失传 lost*肯定会 must have*有负面影响 have a negative influence on sth*中国的经济 Chinas economyIf these traditional arts lost,must have a negative influence on Chinas economy.F 从句必有句，从句必有主句。If these traditional arts lost,they must have a negative influence on Chinas economy.F 是这件事情，给中国的经济带来负面影响。不是 traditional arts，所以不能使用they。If these traditional arts lost,which must have a negative influence on Chinas economy.F 都是从句，这句话没有主句了！If these traditional arts lost,it must have a negative influence on Chinas economy.F If these traditional arts are lost,it must have a negative influence on Chinas economy.F If these traditional arts were lost,it must have a negative influence on Chinas economy.T If these traditional arts were lost,and it may have a negative impact on Chinas economy.F and 并列：结构相似，意义相关【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】从句和从句并列 主句和主句并列 从句必有句 从句必有主句 从句必有谓语动词 但事实是，这些东西对我们在事业上的成功几乎没有持久的影响。相反，每天都乐观面对棘手的事情，是一种提升幸福感的更好的方法。*但是 but*事实是 the reality is that sv.*几乎没有持久影响 have little lasting impact on sth*我们事业上的成功 our success in the workplace*相反 instead*每天都乐观 being optimistic|being positive every day*棘手的事情 tough matters*提升幸福感 improve wellbeingBut the reality is that these things have little lasting impact on our success in the workplace.Instead,being optimistic for tough matters every day is a much better way to improve wellbeing.T 作业：我们应该意识到的是，诸如金钱之类的东西对我们的生活的成功几乎没有任何持久的影响。相反，真正起作用的是乐观面对所有遇见的事情。【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】*我们应该意识到的是 what we are supposed to realize*遇见的事情 things encounteredevery day:1.名词；2.副词 Every day counts.2.形式主语句|某事是怎样的it is adj for sb to do sth 某人做某事是怎样的 it is adj to do sth 做某事是怎样的 it is adj that sv.某事是怎样的 现如今，老师经常抱怨，学生对同学冷漠。*现如今 nowadays|now|today*经常 often*抱怨 complain*学生对同学冷漠 students are insensitive to classmatesindifference|indifferent It is often for teachers to complain that students are insensitive to classmates.F 错误：often 是副词，不是形容词 Nowadays,it is common for teachers to complain that students are insensitive to classmates.Nowadays,it is bitterly common to see the reality that teachers often complain that their students are insensitive to classmates.*bitterly 苦涩地，悲伤地bitter love 苦涩的爱恋【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】It is complain by teachers that students are insensitive to classmates.F 错误：is complain 错误，改成 is complained|be do 必死！be doing 现在进行 be done 现在被动 I am write this letter for the purpose of apply for the position.F 错误：1.am write|改成 am writing|be do 必死2.of apply 错误，改成 of applying|of do 必死。介词后面不能跟动词原形，必须是动词 ing形式。其中 of代表所有的介词。五大必死错误：1.of do 必死|介词后面不能跟动词原形2.be do 必死|be doing,和 be done3.Do 必死|陈述句句首，不能使用动词原形做主语4.dodo 必死|一句话有且仅有一个谓语动词，并列和从句除外5.will doing 必死|will+do;can+do【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】【微信公众号：阿狸考研，免费分享】