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22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）英语二写作冲刺英语二写作冲刺大作文三段：大作文三段：第一段第一段 数据描述数据描述+初步指出本质初步指出本质核心写作词核心写作词+核心写作句法核心写作句法=段落段落第一段核心写作句法第一段核心写作句法：1.As、which 引导的非限定性定语从句引导的非限定性定语从句As 在句首在句首，which 在后半句在后半句；as 有有“正如正如”之意之意，which 表示表示“这这”。As is logically demonstrated by the chart,there is an array offigures indicating the changes in the number of sth/people doing sth.the ratios/proportion of sth/people doing sth;These figures reflect a prevalent phenomenon that an increasingnumberofpeoplearepayingcloserattentiontothenecessity/significance/negative influence of sth/doing sth,which isthought-provoking and deserves a further analysis.2.独立独立主格主格结构结构A takes up 20%,and B makes up 30%,with C and D occupying10%and 40%respectively.The rate of A rose from 10%to 40%,but the percentage of B fellfrom 60%to 25%,with the portion of C staying/remaining at thesame level of 30%./,with the portion of C experiencing/undergoing asmall change from 30%to 28%.3.同位语从句：同位语从句：that+完整句子；完整句子；that 译为译为“那就是那就是/即即”；22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）（定语从句：（定语从句：that+不完整句子；不完整句子；that 译为译为“的的”。）This graph discloses an undeniable fact that A exerts a subtle butgreat influence on B.第一段核心写作词、表达第一段核心写作词、表达：1.图表：图表：chart;graph;diagram;bar/pie/table/line/curve chart;2.数据：数据：figures;data;statistics;an array of;a series of;3.副词副词：logically；clearly；systematically；obviously/remarkably;slightly;dramatically/sharply;steadily/continuously;4.表明：表明：indicate/demonstrate/suggest/show;5.揭示：揭示：disclose/reveal/unveil;6.增减：增减：increased-decreased;rise-fall;rose-fell;ascend-descend;7.占据：占据：take up;make up;occupy;account for;8.各自地：各自地：respectively；9.比重比重：rate/portion/percentage 百分比百分比/share 份额份额；ratio/proportion（侧重整体比（侧重整体比）；10.反映：反映：reflect；mirror;epitomize(成为成为.的缩影的缩影）；11.发人深思的：发人深思的：thought-provoking;12.值得分析：值得分析：deserve a further analysis/a profound reflection;第一段框架总结：第一段框架总结：增减段增减段：As is systematically demonstrated by the chart,there is anarray of data indicating the changes in the number of sth/peopledoing sth.From 1998 to 2018,the rate of A rose obviously from 35%22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）to 85%,while/but the percentage of B fell dramatically from 65%to45%,with the portion of C undergoing a slight increase from 45%to48%.These statistics are meaningful and require a further analysis.比重段比重段：Systematically demonstrated by the graph aboveis anarray of data indicating the ratio/proportion of sth/people doing sth.It can be seen that the rate of A takes up 25%,and the portion of Bmakes up 45%(the largest share),with C and D accounting for10%and 20%respectively.These data disclose an undeniable factthat sth brings a subtle but great/negative/tremendous influence onsth,which is thought-provoking and deserves a further analysis.第二段核心内容第二段核心内容一、一、第二段核心句法第二段核心句法1.定语从句定语从句That+不完整的句子；不完整的句子；that 在从句中充当主宾表；在从句中充当主宾表；that 译为译为“的的”。我们必须要考虑我们必须要考虑的的最重要最重要因素因素；The most important factor that we have to consider/take intoconsideration;2.名词的后置定语总结：名词的后置定语总结：1）To do:a problem to be addressed/tackled;2）Done:a series of figures provided by the pie chart;3）Doing:an array of data disclosing the changes in sth.;22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）4）介词短语：介词短语：the figures in the chart;the men in their 40s;themen under/over 40;5）形容词短语：形容词短语：the staff satisfied/content with their job;6）That/who:thestudentswhoparticipateinafter-classactivities;3.如何写长句：如何写长句：1）引导词引导词-高端高端There is no denying the fact that.It is no exaggeration to say that.With the society developing rapidly,With economy boosting,With peoples lifestyle changing,With the living standard improving,With the living rhythm quickening,2）插入语插入语-客观客观directly or indirectly;in one way or another;位置：位置：be 后后行前行前助行间助行间；The author of the chart is,in one way or another,drawing ourattention to the fact/phenomenon that+完整句子（同从完整句子（同从）；Computers，directly or indirectly,exert a tremendous influenceon our life.22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）Information technology can,in one way or another,bring asubtle but great influence on our life.3）从句从句-漫长漫长原因状语从句；原因状语从句；which 非限定性定语从句；非限定性定语从句；Due to the fact that;owing to the truth that;in that;Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatpollutionhasbeenbecomingincreasinglysevereduetothefactthattheindustrialization is accelerating/due to the acceleration ofindustrialization.人们的生活方式正在改变，这直接间接导致了图表中所反映的现人们的生活方式正在改变，这直接间接导致了图表中所反映的现象象/趋势：趋势：Peoples lifestyle has been changing,which,directly orindirectly,leads/led to the phenomenon/tendency disclosed by thechart.注意：不要在一句话中同时使用三种写长句的方法；最好在一句注意：不要在一句话中同时使用三种写长句的方法；最好在一句中只用中只用 1-2 种方法。种方法。第二段核心词、表达第二段核心词、表达：1）不可见的、无形的：不可见的、无形的：invisible；intangible；2）现象：现象：phenomenon；phenomena；3）导致：导致：lead to;cause;contribute to;4）考虑：考虑：consider；take into consideration;take into account;5）同等重要的：同等重要的：equally important;6）扮演不可或缺的角色：扮演不可或缺的角色：play/perform an indispensable role in;22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）7）以上提及的因素：以上提及的因素：the above-mentioned factors;8）现 象 背 后 的 驱 动 力：现 象 背 后 的 驱 动 力：the driving forces behind thephenomenon;第二段第二段原因段框架原因段框架：Sowhataretheinvisible/intangiblereasonsbehindthechanges/phenomenon reflected by the chart?The most importantfactor that we have to take into account is sth/that+完整句子。完整句子。Thereis no denying the fact that sth may,directly or indirectly,bring atremendous influence on sth.Another equally important element tobe noticed is sth,which,in one way or another,leads to thephenomenon revealed by the figures.(Additionally,the role playedby sth cannot be ignored.补充补充)To conclude,the above-mentionedfactors are the driving forces behind the phenomenon/changesunveiled by the diagram.第二段：原因段第二段：原因段+内涵段内涵段！核心表达词：核心表达词：1.吸引关注：吸引关注：draw/attract attention to2.必要性必要性/重要性重要性/危害：危害：necessity；significance/importance；harm/negative influence;3.作者（画表的人作者（画表的人）：the author/the drawer;4.重要：重要：vitally important;play an indispensable role in;play a22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）vital part in;5.影响：影响：influence；affect；bring/exertagreat/subtle/tremendous/destructive influence/effect on;6.本不该：本不该：would not have;本该本该 would have;7.如果没有如果没有/要不是：要不是：without;but for;Without your assistance,I would have failed/I would not havesucceeded.8.毫不夸张地说：毫不夸张地说：There is no exaggeration in saying that.It is no exaggeration to say that.内涵段内涵段框架框架：（内涵段（内涵段+原因）原因）The author/drawer of the chart is,as a matter of fact,attractingour attention to the necessity/significance/harm of sth/doing sth.1)There is no denying the fact that sth may,directly or indirectly,play an indispensable role in doing sth.2)Without sth/doing sth,we would not have made remarkable progress in the socialdevelopment/economic growth/our personal growth/academicperformance.3)It is no exaggeration to say that sth,in one wayor another,exerts a subtle but great effect/influence on sth.第二段重要补充第二段重要补充：分点分析原因分点分析原因，要注意要注意，这时要慎用观点一这时要慎用观点一二三二三。（2012Firstly,the people under 40 are discontent with theirjob due to the fact that.Secondly,the people over 40 are morecontent with their work because.)22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）第三段：措施段第三段：措施段/趋势总阶段趋势总阶段第三段语法点：第三段语法点：1.虚拟：虚拟：1)It is high time that we should do/we did sth.It is high time that sth should be done/sth were done.2)Itisessential/indispensable/vital/advisable/imperativethat we(should)do sth/sth(should)be done.2.倒 装 句：倒 装 句：Only in this way can we address the problemreflected by the figures.Only in this way can the current situation ofsth reflected by the chart be ameliorated/improved/bettered.措 施 段措 施 段 框 架：框 架：With the problem becoming severe/With thesituation becoming urgent,it is high time that effective measureswere taken/adopted.For one thing,it is indispensable that theawareness/consciousness of sth/doing sth(should)be enhanced;for another,the department concerned ought to make relevantrules and regulations to protect/fight against sth.Only in theseways can the problem be addressed/the current situation beameliorated.总 结 趋 势 段总 结 趋 势 段：With all the analyses considered/taken intoconsideration,it is safe to draw a conclusion that,in the comingyears/decades,there is a trend/tendency for the current situationto develop toward a better/an optimistic direction/for thenumber of sth to keep rising/falling continuously.Taking an22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）objective/arational/acomprehensiveattitudetowardthetrend/tendency/situation is necessary/vitally important.小作文框架小作文框架：（书信）（书信）称呼：称呼：1 分分题干明确：题干明确：Dear Jack,题干不明确：题干不明确：Dear Sir or Madam,To whom it may concern,第一段：第一段：2 分分30 词词 2 句句 开门见山开门见山As a college student,On behalf of StudentsUnion,As a member of(),I am writing this letter toyou to express/convey my 情感情感+补充补充。The details areas follows.my 情感情感+补充补充。1）感谢感谢：my heartfelt gratitude for what you didfor me.(补充补充)2）投诉：投诉：my deep regret for the inconvenience/losses that you caused.3）道 歉：道 歉：mysincereapologyfortheinconvenience/losses that I caused.别的信：别的信：my sincere hope/strong wish that+同从同从22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）4）询问询问/介绍：介绍：my sincere hope that you/I canprovide me/you with some information/details aboutsth.5）求职求职/招聘：招聘：my sincere hope that I can workfor you/you can work for us as a(职位职位 secretary).6）邀请：邀请：my strong wish that you can take partin/participate in the activity of().7）号 召：号 召：my strong wish that you can makecontributionto/makedonationsforthoseinneed/trouble.8）建议建议：my sincere hope that you/I can offer me/you some advice on sth/about how to do sth.9）祝贺：单独写祝贺：单独写I am writing this letter to you to congratulateyou on your success in sth/doing sth/your admissionby Beijing University.Congratulations!第二段第二段 涵盖要点涵盖要点 4 分分 60 词词 5 句话句话The main point that I would center on issth/that+表从表从.There is no doubt in saying that sthcan,directly or indirectly,play a vital role in22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）sth/doing sth.Secondly,it is indispensable an essentialfor you/us to consider sth/the fact that+同从同从。It is noexaggeration to say that sth,in one way or another,brings a great influence on sth.Another equallyimportant thing to be noticed is the role played by sth,which is a precondition for sth/which lays a solidfoundation for sth/doing sth.(如果第二段不能说如果第二段不能说 123；充分使用四句万能句充分使用四句万能句）。第三段第三段 2 分分 30 词词2-3 句句以下供选择：以下供选择：1）Thank you very much for taking time fromyour busy/tight schedule to read my letter.2）Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou/meeting you in the near future.An immediatereply would be fully/highly/deeply appreciated.3）My best wishes to you!Happy New Year!4）投诉信投诉信：I sincerely hope that you can find outthe right solution to the problem in discussionbefore things get worse.落款：落款：1 分分Yours sincerely,Li Ming22 考研英语二冲刺课程写作-现场版讲义（谭剑波）Sincerely=truly=faithfully=respectfully;补充：公告；备忘录；补充：公告；备忘录；公告：公告：Notice/Announcement/VolunteersWanted/Chinese Speaking ContestDecember 12,2021三段式三段式，正文正文。（日程安排日程安排：The activity is scheduledto be held at 8 oclock in the morning next Sunday inthe Dining Hall.Several professors and school leaderswill be invited.)StudentsUnion备忘录：备忘录：MemoTo:Jack,the SecretaryFrom:Li Ming,the ManagerDate:December 12,2021Subject:(根据题干写根据题干写 6 词词)Computer training for the staff正文正文 2-3 段段备忘录没有落款备忘录没有落款。