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2022 写作专项班 作 一、审题三要素1.图画主体是什么？按类别，字 人 物2.主体伴随动作是什么？3.图画主题是什么？二、图画作二句作法开头段描述图画段：1.如图所示2.具体描述（人）3.具体描述（物）4.具体描述（字）主体段阐释意义段：5.阐释意义6.人的意义7.现象的意义8.强调主题结尾段给出评论段：9.给出评论10.评论一11.评论二12.评论三三、描述图画段：（一一）如如图图所所示示：直观来看，这幅图片很有说服力，而且它解释了这个现象的流行程度。Intuitively,the picture is compelling,and it explains how popular this socialphenomenon is.*intuitively 直观上来看*the picture 图片=drawing|cartoon*compelling 有说服力的形容图片的词：*ironic 讽刺的|intriguing 有趣的|interesting 有趣的|thought-provoking 发人深省的|illuminating 具有启发意义的|ridiculous荒谬的*how popular this social phenomenon is 这个社会现象有多么的流行As is clearly depicted in this interesting and thought-provoking picture,正如这幅有趣且发人深省的图片，所清晰描绘地那样*clearly 清晰地*depict 描绘|portray,describe（二二）具具体体描描述述（人人）图画描述必备公式：There be 画面主体+主体方位+主体动作.There be xxx,doing sth.存在某物，在做某事。=画面主体+主体动作+主体方位xxx is doing sth in the middle of the cartoon.单图|两图单图作文的方位in the middle of the cartoon 在图画中央at the top of the picture 图片的顶部at the bottom of the picture 图片的底部at the left side of the picture 图片的左侧at the right side of the picture 图片的右侧两图作文的方位in the first picture|in the second picture（三三）具具体体描描述述（物物）（四四）具具体体描描述述（字字）图片中文字会描述的时候：What impresses me most is the caption under the picture,which says:xxx.让我印象最为深刻的是，图片下面的文字，上写道：xxx。*caption under the picture 图片下的文字title under the picture 图片下面的标题What impresses me greatly is the title under the picture“xxx”,which is thefinishing touch of the whole comic.*what impresses me greatly 让我印象最为深刻的*the title under the picture 图片下面的标题*which is the finishing touch of the whole comic 是整幅漫画的点睛之笔图片中文字不会描述的时候：What impresses me most is the caption under the picture,which highlightsthe importance of xxx.*highlight the importance of xxx 强调了 xxx 的重要性四、阐述意义段（五五）阐阐述述意意义义：Honestly,if we get stuck in the shallow meaning of the picture,we will failto grasp the intention of the cartoonist.老实讲，如果我们拘泥于图片的表层意思，我们将不能了解画家的意图。*honestly 老实讲*if we get stuck in 如果我们陷入*the shallow meaning of the picture 图片的表层意思*fail to do sth 未能做成某事*grasp the intention of the cartoonist 把握画家的意图It is all deliciously ironic when we consider that what is true of the picture iseven truer of the real world.*it is all deliciously ironic 非常讽刺|负面It is all deliciously encouraging 非常鼓舞|正面*what is true of the picture is even truer of the real world 图片中的情况是真实的，现实世界更是如此What we are supposed to realize is that in order to grasp the intention ofthe cartoonist,we should associate the picture with our life.*what we are supposed to realized 我们应该意识到的是*in order to grasp the intention of the cartoonist 为了把握画家的意图*associate the picture with our life 把图片和我们的生活联系起来（六六）人人的的意意义义：relate A to BA:图画中人B:现实中人A is referred to BA 和 B 联系起来A:图画中人B:现实中人After thoroughly looking over this picture,we can safely come to thisconclusion that the painter tries to relate A to B.仔细地看过图片之后，我们可以安全地得出这个结论，画家试图将 A 与 B 联系起来。*after thoroughly looking over this picture 仔细地看过图片之后*we can safely come to this conclusion 我们可以安全地得出这个结论*the painter tries to relate A to B 画家试图将 A 与 B 联系起来。（七七）现现象象的的意意义义：The phenomenon is ironically referred to similar situation in modern China,especially among the golden week.The phenomenon is ironically commonplace in many tourist sites.这个现象，在许多旅游景点，是令人讽刺地习以为常。（八八）强强调调主主题题；Clearly,the painter tries to evoke our serious consciousness over theincreasingly deteriorating living environment around us.*the painter tries to evoke our serious consciousness over sth.画家试图唤醒我们对 xx 的意识。Thinking about the symbolical meaning of the cartoon is key tounderstanding the shortsighted nature of some individuals.*Thinking about the symbolical meaning of the cartoon 思考这幅漫画的象征意义*understanding the shortsighted nature of some individuals 了解一些人目光短浅的本质五、给出评论段（1.建议；2.原因；3.展望未来；4.素材）（九九）给给出出评评论论Thinking about the symbolical meaning of the cartoon is key tounderstanding the shortsighted nature of some individuals.Based on thediscussion,I firmly believe that to eliminate this undesirable phenomenon,we must take effective measures.*to eliminate this undesirable phenomenon 为了消除这个不好的现象*we must take effective measures 我们应该采取有效措施There is nothing new under the Sun,so after taking the following measures,nothing cant be properly solved.*after taking the following measures 采取以下措施后*nothing cant be properly solved.没有什么是不能够被妥善解决的（）评评论论一一First of all,we must work hard in the whole society to create an atmospherethat strives to protect the environment.*we must work hard in the whole society 全社会必须联合起来*create an atmosphere 创造一个氛围*strive to protect the environment 努力保护环境First of all,we must work hard in the whole society to create an atmospherethat strives to do sth.（一一）评评论论二二In addition,let the public realize that the pollution of the environment will beseverely punished.*in addition 此外*let the public realize sth 让大众意识到某事*the pollution of the environment will be severely punished 对于环境的污染会被严厉地惩罚严惩破坏环境的人（二二）评评论论三三Last but not least,I would like to emphasize more:to fully addressing it isdown to every last one of us,and its success depends on action andcommitment.Last but not least,I really hope and believe that with the joint efforts of thegovernment and public,a satisfactory result will not come too late.*with the joint efforts of the government and public 来自政府和大众的共同努力*a satisfactory result will not come too late 不久后，就会产生令人满意的结果实实战战一一描述图画段：（一一）如如图图所所示示：Intuitively,these two pictures are compelling,and they explain howcommon and serious this social phenomenon is.*how common and serious this social phenomenon is 这个现象，是多么的普遍，和多么的严重。common 普遍的serious 严重的It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing one impendingproblem in modern China:how to educate and cultivate the young.*It goes without saying that 毋庸置疑*aim at doing sth 目的是为了做某事*reveal one impending problem 揭示了一个迫在眉睫的问题*how to educate and cultivate the young 如何教育和培养年轻人（二二）具具体体描描述述（左左图图）There is a little flower in the first|left picture,looking so beautiful,with theprotection from the greenhouse.（三三）具具体体描描述述（右右图图）But on the contrary,in the right picture,when moved out,it looks rathermiserable.*on the contrary 与之相反的*when moved out 当被搬出来*it looks rather miserable 看上去十分凄惨具体描述：Sheltered from wind and rain,a pot of flower is thriving and flourishing inthe greenhouse.However,it quickly fades away without a roof over its head.The pictures highlight a message:“Flowers cultivated in the greenhousecannot weather rain and wind.”（四四）具具体体描描述述（字字）What impresses me the most is the title under the pictures:the flower ingreenhouse cannot withstand wind and rain,which is the finishing touch ofthe whole comics.*the title under the pictures 这两幅图片下面的标题*the flower in greenhouse cannot withstand wind and rain 温室的花朵经不起风雨the flower cultivated in the greenhouse cannot weather rain and wind*which is the finishing touch of the whole comics.是这幅漫画的点睛之笔What impresses me the most is the caption under the pictures,whichhighlights the severe outcomes of overprotection.*the caption under the picture 图片下面的文字*highlight the severe outcomes of overprotection 强调了过度保护的严重后果阐述意义段（五五）阐阐述述意意义义：It is all deliciously ironic when we consider that what is true of the picturesis even truer of the real world.Honestly,if we get stuck in the shallowmeaning of the pictures,we will fail to grasp the intention of the cartoonist.What we are supposed to realize is that in order to get the intention of thepainter,we should associate the pictures with our life.如果你后面 68 句，会自己写，那么就三选一如果后面 68 句，不太会，那么就都选。（六六）人人的的意意义义：The painter tries to relate the delicate|little flower in the picture to a kindof children overprotected by their parents in real world.*the painter tries to relate A to B*the delicate flower 这朵娇弱的花*to a kind of children overprotected by their parents in real world 在真实世界中，被他们父母过度保护的孩子 a kind of children who are overprotected by their helicopter parents.一类被他们直升机父母过度保护着的孩子The painter tries to relate the delicate|little flower in the picture to a kindof children overprotected by their parents in real world,who dare not totake the challenge and overcome difficulties when they grow up.*dare to do sth 敢于做某事dare to know 敢于知道dare not to do sth 不敢做某事*take the challenge 面对挑战*overcome difficulties 克服困难（七七）现现象象的的意意义义：选择写：The phenomenon is ironically referred to similar situation in modern China.The phenomenon is ironically commonplace in modern China.这个现象，当代中国，是令人讽刺地习以为常。|万能！（八八）强强调调主主题题；Clearly,the painter tries to bring the dire consequences of overprotectioninto the limelight.*bring sth into the limelight 引起公众对某事的关注*the dire consequence 严峻的后果Clearly,the painter tries to bring the great merits of xx into the limelight.Thinking about the symbolic meaning of the cartoon is key tounderstanding the shortsighted nature of some individuals,particularlysome parents.给出评论段（1.建议；2.原因；3.展望未来；4.素材）（九九）给给出出评评论论Based on the above discussion,I firmly believe that to eliminate thisundesirable phenomenon,we must take effective measures.There isnothing new under the Sun,so after taking the following measures,nothingcannot be properly solved.*eliminate this undesirable phenomenon 消除这个不好的现象（）评评论论一一First of all,I think,we must work hard in the whole society to create anatmosphere that is against overprotection.*we must work hard in the whole society 全社会必须努力起来*an atmosphere that is against overprotection 不利于过度保护的氛围create an atmosphere that is against the situation further deteriorating.创造一个，不利于现状进一步恶化的氛围（一一）评评论论二二In addition,let the public realize that overprotection can cause direconsequences.In addition,if the public can be made aware of great merits ofindependence,it would be much better.此外，如果能够让大众意识到，独立的巨大益处，这将是极好的。（二二）评评论论三三Last but not least,I really hope and believe that with the joint efforts of thegovernment and the public,a satisfactory result will not come too late.版本二：In summary,in contemporary China,it is high time that we took effectiveand proactive measures to solve the impending problem of overprotection.On the one hand,parents are supposed to learn to raise the childrenscientifically.On the other hand,if the children themselves can be madeaware of the importance of independence,it would be much better.Withappropriate laws and alert public,it will only be a matter of time before theproblem becomes a thing of the past.*it is high time 是时候做某事了*take effective and proactive measures 采取有效且积极的措施*solve the impending problem of overprotection 解决过度保护这个迫在眉睫的问题*raise the children scientifically 科学地抚育孩子*With appropriate laws and alert public 凭借着适当的法律和警觉的民众*it will only be a matter of time 只是时间的问题实实战战二二描描述述图图画画段段：Intuitively,the picture is rather compelling,and it explains how popular thissocial phenomenon is,especially after the initiative of the Belt and Road.There is one boiling hotpot in the middle of the cartoon,with variousingredients|things inside,like Kungfu,Lao She,Bisheng,Peking Opera andso on.What impresses me the most is the title under the picture:“thecultural hotpot,delicious and nutritious”,which is the finishing touch of thewhole comic.*especially after the initiative of the Belt and Road 尤其是在一带一路之后*such as Buddhism,Confucianism,Kungfu,Enlightenment,post-modernism,Lao She,Shakespeare,Einstein,the Swan Lake,andPeking Opera.*which is the finishing touch of the whole comic 这是整幅漫画的点睛之笔*what impresses me the most is the title under the picture,which is thefinishing touch of the whole comic.|当我们标题不会写，主题词也不会写的时候，我们还能怎么表达自己想考上的诚意？what impresses me the most is the title under the picture,which highlightsthe importance of cultural integration,and in my opinion,which is thefinishing touch of the whole comic.The hotpot features a wide range of ingredients at home and abroad,including Kungfu,Buddhism,Confucianism,Peking Opera,Enlightenment,Post-modernism,Albert Einstein,which makes the big feast tasty andnutritious at the same time.Honestly speaking,if we get stuck in the shallow meaning of the picture,wewill fail to grasp the intention of the cartoonist.What we are supposed torealize is that in order to get the intention of the author,we shouldassociate the picture with our life,in modern world,a world undergoingmajor developments,transformations and adjustments.The painter tries torelate the hotpot in the picture,with various things inside,to our society,with so many different cultures inside.Clearly,the painter tries to bring thegreat merits of cultural integration into the limelight.*Clearly,in my opinion,cultural integration should be greatly encouraged,rather than dismissed or condemned as of little value in this ever-changingand dynamic world.should be greatly encouraged 应该被大力提倡rather than 而不是be dismissed as of little value 被视作毫无价值be condemned as of little value 被谴责为毫无价值in this ever-changing and dynamic world 在这个日新月异的世界*阐释意义可以用到的万能的表达：What has been portrayed in the picture precisely mirrors what our society isexperiencing in contemporary China.图片中所描述的，恰恰地反应了，在当代中国，我们社会正在经历的事情。给给出出评评论论段段：Based on the above discussion,I firmly believe that to promote thisdesirable phenomenon,we must take effective measures.There is nothingnew under the Sun,so after taking the following measures,nothing cannotbe properly solved.I think,first of all,we must work hard in the wholesociety to create an atmosphere that strives to encourage culturalintegration.In addition,if the public can be made aware of the greatbenefits of cultural integration,it would be much better.Last but not least,I really hope and believe that with the joint efforts of the government andthe public,a satisfactory result will not come too late.版版本本二二：In conclusion,I could not help thinking about one sentence delivered by X,:“Culture is a country and nations soul.Our country will thrive only if ourculture thrives,and our nation will be strong only if our culture is strong.Without full confidence in our culture,without a rich and prosperous culture,the Chinese nation will not be able to rejuvenate itself.While taking theessence of foreign cultures,we should also preserve our own traditionalone,not only due to its rich historical value,but also because it can serve tosolidify our nations future.”*I could not help thinking about one sentence 我情不自禁地想到了一句话*Culture is a country and nations soul.文化是一个国家，一个民族的灵魂。*Our country will thrive only if our culture thrives,and our nation will bestrong only if our culture is strong.文化兴，国运兴，文化强，民族强。*Without full confidence in our culture,without a rich and prosperousculture,the Chinese nation will not be able to rejuvenate itself.没有高度的文化自信，没有文化的繁荣兴盛，就没有中华民族的伟大复兴。*While taking the essence of foreign cultures,we should also preserve ourown traditional one,not only due to its rich historical value,but alsobecause it can serve to solidify our nations future.在汲取外国文化精髓的同时，我们必须保护我们的传统文化，不仅仅由于其丰富的历史价值，也因为它有助于巩固我们国家的未来。serve to do sth 有助于做某事solidify 巩固essence 精髓得分作文=没有错误+内容完整高分作文=没有错误+内容完整+高分表达（词句逻辑素材）实实战战三三Intuitively,these two pictures are compelling,and they explain how popularand touching this social phenomenon is,from which we can draw muchinspiration and strength.There was a young mother in the left side picture,walking side by side and hand in hand with her little daughter,threedecades ago.And in the right picture,thirty years later,the daughter,as afully-grown adult