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考研英语 写作冲刺 第二、三段写作 词汇/表达/思路拓展 刘哲 第二段结构与参考模板：英语一：P2 第第1步：图片传达的道理步：图片传达的道理 第第2步：背景步：背景 第第3步：原因步：原因 第第4步：影响步：影响 The message conveyed in the picture is that_.With peoples living standards improving（或其它合适背景）,_重申现象_._原因1_.Also,原因2.坏现象：If this situation continues,we would 负面结果1.And it can even 负面结果2.好现象:If we can _,好结果。第二段必背原因 The picture reflects a phenomenon that some young people lack the spirit of persistence and therefore are liable to quit easily whenever they run into any difficulty图片传达的道理图片传达的道理.These young people may have been excessively spoiled by their parents who do not teach them the significance of perseverance.So when they are tired and feel overwhelmed,the first word that comes to their mind is“quit”.Also,a small proportion of young people are not ambitious enough,they will not set a goal that needs them to be perseverant to achieve两条原因两条原因.In todays society,which is full of fierce competition,less persistent young people may end up living a busy but fruitless life后果后果.这幅图向我们反映了一个现象：有些年轻人缺乏坚持不懈的精神，一旦遇到任何困难，他们会轻易放弃。他们可能受到父母的过度溺爱，且他们的父母没有教过他们坚持不懈的重要性。所以，当他们感到疲惫、承受不住的时候，第一个出现在他们脑海里的词就是“放弃”。同时，一小部分年轻人不够有抱负，他们不会设定需要通过坚持不懈才能完成的目标。在今天这个充满竞争的社会里，没有坚持不懈精神的年轻人很有可能最终会过得碌碌无为。第二段结构与参考模板：英语二：P2 第第1步：数据反映的道理步：数据反映的道理 第第2步：原因步：原因 The chart aims to convey the message that _反映的道理反映的道理_.Several reasons can account for the phenomenon.Firstly,原因原因1.In addition,原因原因2.第二段结构与参考模板：英语二：The messages conveyed in the line chart are that the government has increased investment in the construction of museums and that people have become more interested in visiting museums.Several reasons can account for the trend.Firstly,to enrich peoples cultural life and make them have a better understanding of Chinese history,the government has increased its budget for building more museums and holding various exhibitions so as to attract more visitors.Secondly,with peoples living standards improving,they pay more attention to enriching their life and making themselves more knowledgeable,which explains the dramatic increase in the number of museum goers.折线图想传达的信息是：政府已经增加了在建设博物馆方面的预算折线图想传达的信息是：政府已经增加了在建设博物馆方面的预算，人们参观博物馆的兴趣也有人们参观博物馆的兴趣也有了大幅提升了大幅提升。几个原因可以解释这一现象几个原因可以解释这一现象。第一第一，为了丰富人们的文化生活为了丰富人们的文化生活，使他们更了解中国使他们更了解中国历史历史，政府已经增加经费用于修建更多博物馆并举办各种各样的展览活动来吸引游客政府已经增加经费用于修建更多博物馆并举办各种各样的展览活动来吸引游客。第二第二，随随着人民生活水平的提高着人民生活水平的提高，人们更重丰富自己的生活人们更重丰富自己的生活，让自己变得更有知识让自己变得更有知识，这解释了为何博物馆这解释了为何博物馆参观人数会明显上升参观人数会明显上升。第二段 必背 背景（with结构不是句子，只是帮我们引出背景，后面还需要写个句子）With peoples living standards improving,people pay more attention to their health.随着人民生活水平的提高,随着人们越来越重视健康 With the advent of various electronic devices,.随着各种各样电子产品的出现 With governments investment in _ increasing,.随着政府在_方面的投资增多 With increasing chances to be exposed to foreign cultures,随着了解外国文化的机会越来越多 With public transportation systems upgraded,.随着公共交通体系的升级 With the number of private cars increasing,.随着私家车数量的增多，第二段必背原因 青少年自身不足/面临的问题 Teenagers Adolescents Young people face competition and peer-pressure 面临竞争和同辈压力 have a hard time communicating with friends/parents/teachers 与朋友/父母/老师交流困难 have no idea of how to plan their lives 不知道如何规划人生 do not have the awareness of 没有的意识 have difficulty in v-ing 年轻人在方面有困难 feel stressful 感到有压力 第二段必背原因 青少年自身不足/面临的问题 Being addicted to electronic devices,young people are not willing to spend time reading.由于沉迷网络,年轻人不愿意花时间阅读。Teenagers are not self-disciplined.青少年不够自律。Young people do not have the awareness of 年轻人没有的意识 Todays college students are facing more fierce competition than those in the past,so they must keep learning and acquiring social skills to make themselves more competitive.如今，大学生面临着比以前大学生更激烈的竞争,所以他们必须不断学习，让自己变得更有竞争力。第二段必背原因 家长教育 Parents are fully occupied with their jobs,so they do not have much time to accompany their children.家长们忙于工作，所以没有时间陪伴孩子们。Some parents have not taught their children about the importance of 有些家长没有教育孩子们的重要性。Some parents cannot set a good example for their children/overprotect their children.家长不能为孩子树立好榜样/溺爱孩子 More parents are paying attention to their childrens education quality.越来越多的家长重视孩子们的教育质量 Throughout their life,parents dedicate their time directly or indirectly for their kids.家长们奉献了他们的一生来培养孩子。第二段必背原因 社会因素 increase the feeling of belonging 增加归属感 make new friends 结交新朋友 become better informed 学到新知识；消息更灵通 acquire more practical skills 掌握更多实用技能 improve communication skills 提高交际能力 第二段必背原因 社会因素 Firstly,the car industry has been developing at a startling speed.某行业在哪里以惊人速度发展。Experts have improved the performance of _ and made them_.专家改善了_的性能，使他们变得_.To express their deep affection for _,people would 会怎样.为了表达对_的深爱，很多人会_。Secondly,the Spring Festival is also a festival for family reunion.节日是大家团聚时刻。第二段必背原因 社会因素 Young people are inclined to explore new possibilities and experience new sceneries.喜欢探索新可能，欣赏新风景。They may have the opportunity to meet and make friends with people from different cultural backgrounds.有机会认识来自不同文化背景的人。第二段必背原因 自律 They may ridiculously think that their parents dare not punish them,so they can do whatever they want.他们可能会荒谬地认为：他们的父母不敢惩罚他们。However,in the future,they may have to obey so many rules in the workplace.They may eventually understand that if they want to be free,they should be more self-disciplined and fulfill obligations.但在将来，他们将不得不遵守工作场合的若干规则。他们最终会明白，如果他们想要自由，就应该更自律且承担更多责任。第二段必背原因 绿色出行绿色出行 括号内的内容很难括号内的内容很难，可以选择不背可以选择不背 To start with,taking public transport such as bus or subway can help reduce carbon emissions,（thus doing less harm to air quality and our environment.）首先首先，选择巴士选择巴士、地铁之类的公共交通工具或者骑自行车有助于减少碳排放地铁之类的公共交通工具或者骑自行车有助于减少碳排放，从而降低会对空气质量和环境造成的影响从而降低会对空气质量和环境造成的影响。Next,green transport consumes less energy such as petroleum（,which is conducive to the sustainable use of the worlds natural resources.）另外另外，绿色出行能减少能源消耗绿色出行能减少能源消耗，如汽油如汽油，对全球自然资源的可持续利用对全球自然资源的可持续利用。Last but not least,an environmental-friendly means of transport usually involves more walking or physical exercise,which is beneficial to peoples health.最后最后，环保的出行方式通常需要走更多的路或进行更多的身体活动环保的出行方式通常需要走更多的路或进行更多的身体活动，这对人们这对人们的健康也非常有益的健康也非常有益。第二段必背原因 交流方式交流方式/面对面交流面对面交流 Above all,when discussing a question with our classmates or friends,we can express ourselves more clearly with the help of facial expressions（and thus misunderstanding can be avoided）.首先首先，当我们与同事和朋友讨论问题的时候当我们与同事和朋友讨论问题的时候，由于面部表情的帮助由于面部表情的帮助，我们可以更清晰我们可以更清晰地表达自己地表达自己，避免误会避免误会。In addition,having dinner and chat with our friends and family members face-to-face can deepen our relationship.而且而且，和朋友或家人一起吃饭聊天能增进我们的感情和朋友或家人一起吃饭聊天能增进我们的感情。Last but not least,unlike online chatting tools which might compromise our privacy,face-to-face communication is definitely safer and more reliable.最后最后，与网络聊天软件不一样与网络聊天软件不一样，这些软件有可能泄漏我们的隐私这些软件有可能泄漏我们的隐私，面对面交流会更安面对面交流会更安全稳妥全稳妥。第二段必背原因 点外卖点外卖 First of all,young employees,especially those in big cities have to work very demanding schedules(9am to 9pm,Monday to Saturday),they simply cant afford the luxury of slowly enjoying lunch in a relaxed environment.首先首先，年轻的工作人士年轻的工作人士，特别是那些一线城市的雇员特别是那些一线城市的雇员，通常工作的时间非常具有压力通常工作的时间非常具有压力（朝朝九晚九九晚九，周一到周六周一到周六），根本无法可能拥有在放松的环境中慢慢享受午餐的这种奢侈根本无法可能拥有在放松的环境中慢慢享受午餐的这种奢侈。Intense competitions in the workplace compounded with an always-on-duty work culture also tend to render workers both physically and mentally drained even when they are off-work at home.职场的巨大竞争压力和随时待命的工作文化也使得雇员下班回家之后处于一个身心俱疲的职场的巨大竞争压力和随时待命的工作文化也使得雇员下班回家之后处于一个身心俱疲的状态。状态。第二段必背原因 坚持阅读的原因坚持阅读的原因 No matter how much stress you have at work or in your personal relationships,an interesting article will keep you in the present moment,letting tensions drain away and allowing you to relax.无论你在工作或各类人际关系中感到多么有压力无论你在工作或各类人际关系中感到多么有压力，一篇有趣的文章能让你享一篇有趣的文章能让你享受这一刻的阅读受这一刻的阅读，会让你的压力烟消云散会让你的压力烟消云散，使你感觉很放松使你感觉很放松。Everything you read fills your head with information.The more knowledge you have,the better-equipped you are to tackle any challenge youll face.你读到的信息会充实你的大脑你读到的信息会充实你的大脑。你的知识量越大你的知识量越大，你就更能做好充分的准备你就更能做好充分的准备去应对你将面临的挑战去应对你将面临的挑战。第二段必背原因 文化交流的意义文化交流的意义 On the one hand,something fresh and fashionable has been injected into our traditional Chinese culture,which helps us to re-examine our traditional culture and brings us a new approach to inherit and protect it.一方面一方面，传统的中国文化里注入了新鲜时髦的信息传统的中国文化里注入了新鲜时髦的信息，有助于我们重新审视有助于我们重新审视传统文化传统文化，换一种思路对其进行传承和保护换一种思路对其进行传承和保护 On the other hand,if we,who are deeply influenced by Chinese Confucianism,can embrace foreign cultures with Confucian ideas such as“benevolence”and“harmony”,it is possible for us to take the essence and discard the dregs as well as promote the localization of foreign cultures.另一方面另一方面，深受中国儒家思想熏陶的我们深受中国儒家思想熏陶的我们，如能以如能以“仁仁”、“和和”这样的儒家这样的儒家思想包容外来文化思想包容外来文化，也能取其精华去其糟粕也能取其精华去其糟粕，促进外来文化的本土化发促进外来文化的本土化发展展。第二段必背原因 我们为什么要保护古建筑物我们为什么要保护古建筑物？Firstly,preserving historic buildings play an important role in that old buildings tell us a lot about the history.By visiting historic buildings,people can witness the history and culture of an area.首先首先，保护历史建筑物在文化方面起着重要作用保护历史建筑物在文化方面起着重要作用，因为古建筑物能向我们讲述历史因为古建筑物能向我们讲述历史。通过参观古建筑通过参观古建筑，人们能见证一个地区的历史文化人们能见证一个地区的历史文化。Economic income is another important benefit of protecting old buildings.Historical buildings can attract a huge number of tourists.Tourism can provide locals with jobs and income,thus boosting the economy.带来经济效应也是保护古建筑物的一个重要好处带来经济效应也是保护古建筑物的一个重要好处。各类纪念碑能吸引大量游客各类纪念碑能吸引大量游客。旅游旅游业能给当地居民带来就业机会和额外收入业能给当地居民带来就业机会和额外收入,从而促进经济的发展从而促进经济的发展。第二段必背原因 好处与意义好处与意义 It can improve our all-round abilities.这能提高我们的综合能力。这能提高我们的综合能力。It can improve our social skills/people skills.这能提高我们的社交能力这能提高我们的社交能力 It can make us more competitive in the job market.这能让我们在职场上更有竞争力。这能让我们在职场上更有竞争力。It can boost our confidence.这能让我们更自信。这能让我们更自信。It can help us establish our network of contacts 这能帮我们建立人脉关系网。这能帮我们建立人脉关系网。It can bring our potential into full play.这能充分发挥我们的潜力。这能充分发挥我们的潜力。It can deepen our relationship with our family members/friends 这能深化我们与家人这能深化我们与家人/朋友之朋友之间的关系。间的关系。第二段必背原因 好处与意义好处与意义 It can make us physically and mentally healthy 这让让我们身心健康。这让让我们身心健康。It makes our dreams come true.这能让我们实现梦想。这能让我们实现梦想。It enables us to develop a healthy lifestyle.这能让我们养成健康的生活方式。这能让我们养成健康的生活方式。It enables us to achieve greater success.这能让我们取得更大的成功。这能让我们取得更大的成功。It can boost our economy and improve the comprehensive national strength of our country.这能促进我们经济的发展并提高我国的综合国力。这能促进我们经济的发展并提高我国的综合国力。It can improve our air quality so as to make us live in a better environment.这样可以改善这样可以改善我们的空气质量，让我们生活在更好的环境里。我们的空气质量，让我们生活在更好的环境里。It can bring a lot of convenience to our lives.这能给我们的生活带来很多方便。这能给我们的生活带来很多方便。第三段模板 P3 第第1步：点评好坏步：点评好坏 第第2步：措施步：措施 英语一英语一 第三段模板第三段模板 _ has been a cherished virtue in Chinese traditional culture for thousands of years.To maintain this vital virtue,relevant departments should _.And young people who _ should be encouraged and awarded.Lets work together to _.英语二 第三段模板 From my perspective,this is a natural and understandable phenomenon.I deem that it is vital for _to _.第三段模板 P3 第第1步：点评好坏步：点评好坏 第第2步：措施步：措施 英语一英语一 Saving food has been a cherished virtue in Chinese traditional culture for thousands of years.To maintain this vital virtue,relevant departments should promote the importance of saving food.And young people who save food should be encouraged and awarded.Lets work together to save food and value the hard work of those farmers.节约粮食一直是中华民族几千年来的传统美德。为了遵守这个重要美德，有关部门需节约粮食一直是中华民族几千年来的传统美德。为了遵守这个重要美德，有关部门需要宣传节约粮食的重要性。节约粮食的年轻人也应该被鼓励和奖励。让我们一起共同节约要宣传节约粮食的重要性。节约粮食的年轻人也应该被鼓励和奖励。让我们一起共同节约粮食，珍惜农民们的辛劳。粮食，珍惜农民们的辛劳。第三段模板 P3 第第1步：点评好坏步：点评好坏 第第2步：措施步：措施 英语二英语二 From my perspective,it is a normal trend of social development.In order to survive in this highly competitive society,the owners of restaurants should improve their services comprehensively and make their restaurants more unique and attractive.在我看来在我看来，这是社会发展的正常趋势这是社会发展的正常趋势。为了在这个充满竞争的社会生存下来为了在这个充满竞争的社会生存下来，餐厅餐厅老板应该全面提升他们的服务并让自己的餐厅变得更有特色老板应该全面提升他们的服务并让自己的餐厅变得更有特色、更有吸引力更有吸引力。第三段可给出的建议 equal attention should be paid to A and B A与B应得到同样的关注。Equal attention should be paid to theoretical knowledge and practical skills.应该同样关注学习理论知识和掌握实践技能。第三段可给出的建议 It is necessary for sb to do sth.某人有必要做某事某人有必要做某事 Reading is the best workout for our brain,so it is necessary for us to read more.阅读是最好的脑力锻炼阅读是最好的脑力锻炼，所以我们应该多读书所以我们应该多读书。第三段可给出的建议 Authorities concerned should implement some necessary policies and regulations to do 有关部门应该实施一些必要的政策和相关条例有关部门应该实施一些必要的政策和相关条例，以以 Authorities concerned should implement some necessary policies and regulations to punish those irresponsible young people who refuse to take care of their elderly parents.有关部门应该实施一些必要的政策和相关条例有关部门应该实施一些必要的政策和相关条例，以惩罚拒绝照料父以惩罚拒绝照料父母的不负责任的年轻人母的不负责任的年轻人。第三段可给出的建议 Young people should acquire various practical skills 掌握各种实践技能 equip themselves with professional knowledge 用专业知识武装自己 have a better understanding of their merits and needs 更好地了解自己的优点与需求 improve their social skills 提升社交技能 improve their problem-solving skills 提升解决问题的能力 improve their foreign language proficiency 提高外语水平 regularly take exercises/exercise on a regular basis 经常锻炼 develop the habit of reading 养成阅读的习惯 bravely face and conquer their difficulties 勇敢面对并战胜困难 protect the environment/improve their awareness of environmental protection 保护环境/提高环保意识 save energy 节约能源 have a better understanding of foreign cultures 更好地了解外国文化 be proud of/celebrate/embrace traditional culture 为自己的传统文化感到骄傲 resist the temptation of online games/online shopping 抵制网络游戏/购物的诱惑 strike a balance between study and part-time jobs 平衡好学习与兼职 第三段可给出的建议 Parents should set an example for their children/be their kids role models 为孩子们树立好榜样 accompany their children/spend quality time with their kids 陪伴孩子 understand their children 理解孩子 teach their children the importance of.教育孩子们的重要性 instill in their kids a sense of 给孩子注入感 第三段可给出的建议 Teachers should upgrade their teaching materials 升级教材 understand the needs of their students 了解学生需求 motivate their students to study harder 鼓励学生们更努力地学习 encourage students to create and think outside the box/to think independently and critically 鼓励学生独立地且具有批判性思维地思考 第三段可给出的建议 Universities should hold more social activities to enrich students campus life 举办更多社交活动以丰富学生们的校园生活 provide students with job training 给学生们提供职业技能培训 improve their scientific research strength 提升科研能力 invest in programs and facilities 对教学项目与设施进行投资 第三段可给出的建议 Governments should focus their budgets on 对进行投资 punish those who do not obey rules/punish perpetrators 惩罚不守规矩的人 punish those factories that contaminate our environment 惩罚污染环境的工厂 enhance peoples awareness of 提高人们的.意识 carry out some polices to v/to curb the negative influence of 颁布政策来/颁布政策来减少的负面影响 educate people on the importance of 教育人们的重要性