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第二段：深层意义阐释段第一段：就图论图，不要有超过图面含义的结论。第二段：展开写图所代表的一类现象。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成第二段思考方向：图要倡导我们做什么一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成问自己：要。？应该。？不要。？不应该。？一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成问自己：要。？应该。？不要。？不应该。？一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成问自己：要。？应该。？不要。？不应该。？一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成问自己：要。？应该。？不要。？不应该。？一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成互联网的“近”与“远”各写一半？一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成第二段思考方向：图要倡导我们做什么1正面的图：为了达到某好的结果，我们要学习图中的做法 2负面的图：揭露问题的广泛性或者严重性 or 我们不能像图中 3貌似有褒有贬：我们常常关注褒，忽略了有贬（从而转化成2）一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成二段中心句Although the cartoon looks/the pictures look simple,it transmits/they transmit a thought-provoking message that+图的目的.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成让步状语从句的倒装：Although+主系表/主谓，主句Adj/adv+as+主系/主谓，主句不变一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成Although he is young,he has mastered seven languages.Although the internet has changed our society,it also gives rise to a range of problems.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成Although the cartoon looks/the pictures look simple,it transmits/they transmit a thought-provoking message that+图的目的.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成Although the cartoon looks/the pictures look simple,Simple as the cartoon looks,it transmits/they transmit a thought-provoking message that+图的目的.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成再插入，变成完美版本：The cartoon,simple as it looks,transmits a thought-provoking message that一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成有节奏的插入：秘境提升 状语（特别是句首的副词、介词短语、分词）状语从句的从句部分宾语从句的主句部分（特别是某人认为、指出等，插入后不可有that）把它，前后带逗号，插在句子的主谓之间一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成It can be said without fear of exaggeration that a mass of modern parents lack essential knowledge skills to nurture their kids.To our dismay,the phenomenon reflected in the cartoon is far from rare in the modern society.Stretching her arms widely,the daughter is ready to protect against the intrusion of the ball.Numerous college students are confused about where their future lie when they are going to graduate.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成A mass of modern parents,it can be said without fear of exaggeration,lack essential knowledge skills to nurture their kids.（说一个很绝对的、听上去有点骇人听闻的事实时）The phenomenon reflected in the cartoon,to our dismay,is far from rare in the modern society.(令我们沮丧的是。）The daughter,stretching her arms widely,is ready to protect against the intrusion of the ball.Numerous college students,when they are going to graduate,are confused about where their future lie一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成The cartoon,simple as it looks,transmits a thought-provoking message that that 后面的全文中心句A.褒义：1.为了。（想一个好的远景），我们应该（按照图中的方法做）2.我们应该。so that 会有什么好结果 一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成褒义：1.为了（想一个好的远景），我们应该（按照图中的方法做）2.我们应该。so that 会有什么好结果 1.in order to be/achieve/realize/do,sb ought to 2.sb ought to so that our society/they will be able to./young people can一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成1.“途中”in order to achieve their desired goals,young people need to develop persistence.2.“选课进行时”in order to acquire knowledge beneficial for their whole lifetime,college students should choose courses which can impart them with creative and practical knowledge,though these courses might look daunting.2.“有书不如读书”young people should attach more importance to reading books so that they can acquire knowledge and skills needed to create a bright future of their own.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成B.贬义 1.图中这个不好的行为对于。（一个好事）已经产生了很坏的影响。2.其实某不好的现象在当代社会是非常常见的。3.大家太常常关注某事的好，而忽视了它的坏。（科技超好用）4.我们应该怎么做+最主要、概括的原因。（大的社会问题）The cartoon,simple as it looks,transmits a thought-provoking message that that 后面的全文中心句一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成贬义 1.图中这个不好的行为对于。（一个好事）已经产生了很坏的影响。2.其实某不好的现象在当代社会是非常常见的。3.大家太常常关注某事的好，而忽视了它的坏。（科技超好用）4.我们应该怎么做+最主要、概括的原因。（大的社会问题）1.A/Doing A has already made tremendously negative impacts on B.2.A/Doing A/the phenomenon that,which sounds utterly/faintly ridiculous,has become far from rare in our so-called civilized/society.3.too often people focus on the benefits of A while taking its drawbacks for granted.4.everyone is responsible for doing sth because一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成1.（旅途之“余”）the selfishness of humanity has already made tremendously negative impacts on our Mother Nature.2.（旅途之“余”）.everyone is responsible for protecting our beautiful planet because it is the homeland to all of us.2.(养老足球赛）neglect of elderly parents,which sounds utterly ridiculous,has become far from rare in our so-called civilized society.3.(手机桌上的聚餐)too often people focus on the benefits of smartphone while taking its drawbacks for granted.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成貌似“贬义”的图、有对比的图，可以转为褒义的来写。毕竟，讽刺的漫画，大多也是告诉我们该怎么做。in order to overcome the challenges,we ought to build/develop/boost self-confidence.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成作业练习：写下面两个图的中心句。互联网的近与远一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to realize our dreams and earn a good living,we ought to realize that there is nothing as an absolutely right way in our life,and we all have a variety of options in front of us.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that too often modern people focus on the benefits of the internet while taking its drawbacks for granted.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成二段主体部分 A.抽象优良意志品质型：分三个阶段来讲改品质为啥好；(万能人群细分）B.非常负面的事情：三连排比讲现象+危害；C.例子的写法；D.校园风与社会常见现象：万能诡辩段一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成A.抽象优良意志品质型：分三个阶段来讲改品质为啥好；考过：坚持、自信、乐观 有可能：耐心、好奇心、诚信 第一句：中心句。为了。我们得坚持、自信、乐观。第二句：过渡句。必须承认，该品质对各个阶段都好。第三句：对于学生，有了该品质，便能学习好、成绩好、提升自信。第四句：对于工作党，这样的宝宝效率高、老板爱、升职快。第五句：生活中，这样的人能力强，解决问题高超，朋友多。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成A.抽象优良意志品质型：分三个阶段来讲改品质为啥好；The illustration,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to realize our dreams/achieve our goals/score a success in our life/,we ought to develop A(self-confidence/curiosity/patience/).A,it can not be denied,plays a key role in all the stages of peoples life.Firstly,students who have strong _ oftentimes have better academic performance,because it can drive them to improve efficiency,become more initiative,and always stay positive.Moreover,in the workplace,if an employee is _,he can definitely create a good impression on his colleagues and superiors,thereby moving up the ladder more quickly.Besides,A helps a lot in our daily life,too.Those who have such personality are charming and attractive,and people around them are absolutely fond of making friends with them.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成抽象意志品质类之：好习惯，不拖延 The illustrations,simple as they seem,transmit a thought-provoking message that in order to achieve our desired goals,we ought to form a habit of taking action immediately.Such habit counts in almost every stage of our life.Firstly,students who show high power of execution generally have better academic performance,because they usually study more efficiently.Moreover,in the workplace,if an employee always finishes his tasks promptly,he can definitely create a good impression on his colleagues and superiors,thereby moving up the ladder more quickly.Besides,such habit helps a lot in our daily life,too.Those who have such personality are charming and attractive,and people around them are absolutely fond of making friends with them.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成这些插图看似简单，却传达了一个发人深省的信息:为了达到我们想要的目标，我们应该养成立即采取行动的习惯。这种习惯几乎在我们生命的每个阶段都很重要。首先，执行力强的学生通常学习成绩更好，因为他们通常学习效率更高。此外，在工作中，如果一个员工总是能迅速完成他的任务，他肯定能给他的同事和上级留下好印象，从而更快地晋升。此外，这样的习惯在我们的日常生活中也有很多帮助。有这种性格的人很有魅力，周围的人都很喜欢和他们交朋友。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成A.抽象意志品质类之作业练习：好奇心。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成The illustrations,simple as they seem,transmit a thought-provoking message that in order to open up new worlds and bring excitement into our life,everyone ought to develop curiosity.Such strength,there is no exaggerating,counts in all stages in ones lifetime.Firstly,students who display strong curiosity often have better academic performance,because they dare ask questions and explore the unknown.Secondly,in the workplace,curious employees are always observant of new ideas and able to see possibilities normally invisible,and they surely have the ability to climb up the ladders more quickly.Besides,curiosity helps a lot in our daily life,too.By no means is the lives of curious people boring,dull,and routine,which make people around them fond of making friends with them.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成这些插图看似简单，却传达了个发深省的信息:为了开辟新的世界，为我们的活带来刺激，每个都应该培养好奇。毫不夸张地说，这种品质在的各个阶段都有价值。先，表现出强烈好奇的学往往有更好的学习成绩，因为他们敢于问问题，探索未知。其次，在作场所，充满好奇的员总是能观察到新的想法，能够看到通常看不的可能性，他们肯定有能更快地往上爬。此外，好奇在我们的常活中也有很的帮助。好奇强的的活绝不是聊、枯燥和例公事，这使得他们周围的喜欢和他们交朋友。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成超强句型提升一：状语从句的省略 同时省略从句的主系 Although found guilty,he still insists that he is innocent.前提：1.主从句主语一致；2.从句是主系表；因此：状语从句连接词后面是：1.分词；2.介词短语（做原句的表语）He often phones me when he is in trouble.(When in trouble,)When people are asked about whether they feel happy,they often can not give an anwer right away.(When asked about）造句：1.当我们遇到困难时，我们应该保持积极的心态以至于我们能想出解决办法。2.尽管年轻人忙着挣钱，他们也不该完全忽略自己的父母。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成造句：1.当我们遇到困难时，我们应该保持积极的心态以至于我们能想出解决办法。2.尽管年轻人忙着挣钱，他们也不该完全忽略自己的父母。1.When confronted with difficulties,we are supposed to stay positive so that we can come up some solutions to bring these problems to their conclusions.2.Although busy with earning a good living,young people are supposed not to ignore their parents entirely.Even occasional visits to their parents would help,because inadequate care is better than no care at all.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成超强句型提升二：可能性句型 Moreover,if an employee is perseverant when facing challenging tasks,chances are high that his superior will be impressed and thus offer him quicker pay rise and promotion.造句：1.如果一个大学生读书时总是得过且过，那么极有可能他毕业后无法找到高薪的工作并过上体面的生活。2.如果我们继续污染环境，那么极有可能我们的地球会惩罚我们、带走我们拥有的美好家园。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成造句：1.如果一个大学生读书时总是得过且过，那么极有可能他毕业后无法找到高薪的工作并过上体面的生活。If a college student just get over with his study by choosing the easiest courses,chances are high that he will not be able to find a high-paying job and live a decent life.2.如果我们继续污染环境，那么极有可能我们的地球会惩罚我们、带走我们拥有的美好家园。If we keep turning a blind eye to environmental pollution,chances are high that our Mother Nature will severely punish us by taking away what we have.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成二段思路B B.非常负面的现象：三个具体现象+三个具体后果（个数可变）考过：破坏环境、过度开发、狂热追星、手机成瘾 有可能：AI/manless driving等科技的坏处、隐私泄露、保护主义第一句：中心句：坏事很严重、很常见、我们只看到了好没看到坏 第二-四句：讲现象。可以细分对于人群：小孩、上班族、老年人 可以细分方面：对学习、对工作、对生活 可以细分场景：关于话题的三个具体场景的影响；第五句：过渡句：然后，如果继续下去，会产生更多恶果。第六句+：根据上面的细分分别讲恶果。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成B.纯负面的细分模版The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that sth,which sounds absolutely ridiculous,has become far from rare in this so-called civilized society.In our daily life,the stories of sb doing sth（普通常见现象）abound;on the social platforms,we can often see that+网络普遍现象;people from time to time feel appalled by the news that+听过的极端事件，完整主谓宾.Apparently,these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions,resulting in more young people starting to follow suit.(青少年有关）/negatively impacting our traditional virtues（社会风气有关）/severely jeopardizing the development of（文化交流、科技有关）.If we keep turning a blind eye to them,there will surely be more unexpected and uncontrollable consequences.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成养老足球赛 The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that neglect of elderly parents,which sounds absolutely ridiculous,has become far from rare in this so-called civilized society.In our daily life,the stories of sons and daughters fighting for their parents wealth abound;on the social platforms,we can often see that some old people are abandoned or even abused by their kids;people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some elderly people die alone at home because they lack the care and attention from their children.Apparently,these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions,resulting in more young people starting to follow suit,and negatively impacting our traditional virtues.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成这幅漫画看似简单，却传达了一个发人深省的信息:在这个所谓的文明社会，忽视年迈的父母，这听起来绝对荒谬，已不再罕见。在我们的日常生活中，儿女们为父母的财富而奋斗的故事比比皆是;在社交平台上，我们经常可以看到一些老人被孩子遗弃甚至虐待;有些老人因为缺乏子女的照顾和照顾而孤独地在家中死去，这一消息令人们不时感到震惊。显然，这些现象已经引起了一系列的不好后果，导致越来越多的年轻人开始效仿，并对我们的传统美德产生了负面影响。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成背熟每一个精华段落，把好句子迁移到同类文章 追星 The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that worshipping pop stars crazily,which sounds faintly ridiculous,has become far from rare in this era.In our daily life,the stories of pupils stealing money to buy their idols CD or concerts tickets abound;on the social platforms,we can often see that numerous adolescents curse each other because their idols are rivals;people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some kids even save money to buy incredibly expensive birthday presents,such as a car or even an aprartment,to their idols.Apparently,these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions,resulting in more young people starting to follow suit,and negatively impacting our social tendency.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成这幅漫画看似简单，却传达了一个发人深思的信息:疯狂崇拜流行明星在这个时代已经不再罕见，虽然这听起来有点荒唐。在我们的日常生活中，学生偷钱买偶像的CD或音乐会的门票的故事比比皆是;在社交平台上，我们经常可以看到无数的青少年因为偶像是对手而互相咒骂;有些孩子甚至会省钱给偶像买昂贵的生日礼物，比如车甚至是房子，这让人们不时感到震惊。显然，这些现象已经造成了一系列的影响，导致更多的年轻人开始效仿，并对我们的社会风气产生了负面影响。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成作业：手机桌上的聚餐的第二段。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that the addiction to smartphones,which sounds faintly ridiculous,has become far from rare in this era,especially among young people.In our daily life,the stories of students failing to pass their exams for being obsessed with mobile games abound;at cafes,restaurants or bars,we can often see that numerous young people,just like screen-addicted zombies,stare at the phones,totally ignoring their friends who sit beside them;people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some young people even cut out their organs and sell them so that they can have enough money to buy the phones of latest models.Apparently,these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions,resulting in more young people starting to follow suit,and placing normal interpersonal relationships in jeopardy.一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成这幅看似简单的漫画传达了一个发人深省的信息，即对智能手机的沉迷，虽然听起来有点可笑，但在这个时代已经不再罕见，尤其是在年轻人中。在我们的日常生活中，学生因为沉迷于手机游戏而未能通过考试的故事比比皆是;在咖啡馆、餐馆或酒吧，我们经常可以看到无数的年轻人，就像沉迷于屏幕的僵尸一样，盯着手机，完全忽视坐在他们身边的朋友;一些年轻人甚至把自己的器官割下来卖掉，这样他们就有足够的钱买最新型号的手机，这一消息让人们不时感到震惊。显然，这些现象已经造成了一系列的影响，导致更多的年轻人开始效仿，并将正常的人际关系置于危险之中。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成*非模版型论据写法补充：今昔对比法+三连细节描写+虚拟讲遗憾 高手学套路，萌新吸表达 第一句：中心句 第二句：过渡句：没有A存在时的世界不是这样的。第三、四句：以前的样子+三连具体化；第五、六句：现在的样子+影响、危害、结果。第七句：怀旧：若没有A的存在，现在的样子也许会更好。（虚拟）一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成 第一句：中心句 第二句：过渡句：没有A存在时的世界不是这样的。a.Gone is the time when（过去的美好样子）b.After the advent of A,there has been no time in history where the lived lives of people have been changed more dramatically.第三句：In the past/Several decades ago/A century ago,there was no A in peoples life.But they led a way happier life.+三个 快乐的景象。第五句：However,now+改变、影响、不好。第七句：Were it not for A,people would/our society would+原本的美好。一笑而过 周思成一笑而过 周思成互联网的近与远 The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that too ofte people focus on the benefits of the internet while taking its drawbacks for granted.Gone is the time when what people cared about most was themselves.Several decades ago,people preferred to hang out with their friends and family in their spare time.There were diverse activities,such as going picnic,playing mahjong,and drinking coffee,which made their social bond stronger.However,like fish,which is destined to be caught by the net,modern people are mostly imprisoned by the Internet.As long as they have leisure time,they would rather stay in front of their computers,chatting with strangers or watching boring TV series,than call their friends or visit their family member