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首段第二部分考研英语二大作文小白考研作文冲刺特训营2020授课人：夏悦1 首段第二部分：介绍变化小白考研关注最值2 有比例变化的图表小白考研模板句模板句1 1：A makes up（比例）,B constitutes（比例）,C composes（比例）,with D and E accounting for/occupying（比例）and（比例）respectively.A A占占，B B占了占了，C C占了占了，而而D D和和E E则各自占了则各自占了和和模板句模板句2：Compared with B,C,and,A took the biggest account for（比例）.相比相比B B，C C和和，A A占了最大的比例，它的比例是占了最大的比例，它的比例是模板句模板句3：Among all the（总共有几部分）categories,A,B and C are the top three parts,accounting for（A的比例）,（B的比例）,（C的比例）respectively.在在种类别中，种类别中，A A、B B、C C三大类分别占三大类分别占2.1 有比例变化的图表模板小白考研套用模板句套用模板句1：The feature makes up 36.3%,the environment constitutes 27.8%and service composes 26.8%,with price and other factors occupying 8.4%and 4.7%respectively.（特色占36.3%，环境占27.8%，服务占26.8%，价格等因素分别占8.4%和4.7%。）套用模板句套用模板句2：Compared with the service,environment,price and other factors,the feature took the biggest account for 36.3%.（与服务、环境、价格等因素相比，特色占比最大，为36.3%。）套用模板句套用模板句3：Among all the five categories,the feature,service and environment are the top three parts,accounting for 36.3%,26.8%,23.8%respectively.（五大类中，特色、服务、环境三大类分别占36.3%、26.8%、23.8%。）2.2 例题小白考研3 有增减变化的图表3.1单一主体变化单一主体变化3.2多主体变化多主体变化趋势相同趋势相同3.3多主体变化多主体变化趋势不同趋势不同小白考研 3.1 增减：单一主体变化模板句模板句1：Based upon the data given above,one can see that the data/percentage of（变化主体）has been on a steady rise/decline over the past few years.The number/percentage is roughly/approximately（最高值）in（年份/年级）.根据上述数据，我们可根据上述数据，我们可以看到以看到一直在稳步上升一直在稳步上升/下降。它的数量在下降。它的数量在年大约是年大约是模板句模板句2：For（变化主体）,there was a marked rise/decline of（增加值/减少值）from（最低值/最高值）to（最高值/最低值）.从从急剧增加急剧增加/减少至减少至，增加，增加/减少了减少了模板句模板句3：Based upon the data given above,the percentage has seen a steady rise/decline from（最低值/最高值）to（次高值/次低值）,however,the percentage has jumped/decreased markly to（最高值）in（年份/年级）.根据上述数据，该百分比已从根据上述数据，该百分比已从稳步上升稳步上升/下降至下降至，但在，但在则大幅上升则大幅上升/下降至下降至。套用模板句套用模板句1：Based upon the data given above,one can see that the percentage of students doing part-time jobs has been on a steady rise over the past few year.The percentage is approximately 88.24%in the final year.（根据上述数据可以看出，兼职学生的比例一直在稳步上升，大四一年的比例约为88.24%。）套用模板句套用模板句2：For students doing part-time jobs,there was a marked rise of 21.47%from 66.77%to 88.24%.（学生兼职率由66.77%上升到88.24%，增幅为21.47%。）套用模板句套用模板句3：Based upon the data given above,the percentage has seen a steady increase from 67.77%to 71.93%in the first three years,however,the percentage has jumped markly to 88.24%in the final year.（根据上述数据，学生做兼职的比例在前三年逐年提升，从67.77%增加至71.93%，而大四学生兼职的比例则猛增至88.24%”。）3.1.1 例题1.2.1单一主体变化单一主体变化主体：某高校兼职学生主体：某高校兼职学生/兼职学生兼职学生 3.2 增减：多主体变化+变化趋势相同模板句：模板句：Based upon the data given above,we can see that the figure of（主体1）had risen/declined from（最低值）to（最高值）during the（几年）years,and the number of（主体2）had jumped/dropped from（最低值）to（最高值）at the same time.根据上述数据，我们可以看出，根据上述数据，我们可以看出，年期间，年期间，的数量从的数量从上升上升/下降到下降到，同时，同时，的数量从的数量从上升上升/下降到下降到1.2.2多主体变化多主体变化趋势相同趋势相同套用模板：套用模板：Baesd upon the data given above,we can see that the figure of museums had risen from 4,165 to 4,692 during the three years,and the number of visitors had jumped from 637.8 million to 781.1 million at the same time.（根据以上数据，三年来博物馆数量从4165个增加到4692个，参观人数从6.37亿人增加到7.81亿人。）3.2.1 例题主体主体1：博物馆：博物馆主体主体2：参观人数：参观人数模板句：模板句：Baesd upon the data given above,we can see that the figure of（主体1）had risen/declined from（最低值）to（最高值）during the（几年）years,and the number of（主体2）had jumped/dropped from（最低值）to（最高值）at the same time.3.2.2 例题（附：数字的英文表示）637800000小白考研 3.3 增减：多主体变化+变化趋势不同模板句模板句1：One can see that the number/percentage of（变化主体A）has been on a steady rise/decline of（增加值/减少值）,while the number/percentage of（变化主体B）has been witnessed on a decline/rise of（减少值/增加值）.可以看到，可以看到，A A稳步上升稳步上升/下降了下降了，而，而B B经历了一个下降经历了一个下降/上升上升模板句模板句2：By comparison with（变化主体（变化主体B）,the number/percentage of（变化主体A）jumped/dropped from（最低值/最高值）to（最高值/最低值）during（多少年）.与与B B相比，相比，A A的数据在的数据在年间从年间从上升上升/下降到下降到3.3.1 例题主体主体1：选择就业的毕业生：选择就业的毕业生主体主体2：选择升学的毕业生：选择升学的毕业生主体主体3：选择创业的毕业生：选择创业的毕业生1.2.3多主体变化多主体变化趋势不同趋势不同套用模板1：One can see that the percentage of hunting for a job has been on a steady decline of 7.4%,while percentage of further studying has been witnessed on a rise of 7.7%.可以看出，找工作的比例稳步下降了7.4%，而深造的比例上升了7.7%。套用模板2：By comparison with hunting for a job,the percentage of further studying jumped from 60.7%to 68.1%during 6 years.与就业率相比，6年间，深造率从60.7%跃升至68.1%。小白考研3.3.2 例题1.2.3多主体变化多主体变化趋势不同趋势不同单一主体模板句：单一主体模板句：For（变化主体）,there was a marked rise/decline of（增加值/减少值）from（最低值/最高值）to（最高值/最低值）.For starting a business,there was a rise of 1.3%from 1.3%to 2.6%.小白考研小白考研2010年真题4 真题演练1.1.什么变化？什么变化？2.2.几个主体？几个主体？mobile phone subscription mobile phone subscription inin developing countries developing countriesmobile phone subscription mobile phone subscription inin developed countries developed countries3.3.变化趋势相同还是不同？变化趋势相同还是不同？增减：多主体变化+变化趋势不同模板句模板句1：One can see that the number/percentage of（变化主体A）has been on a steady rise/decline of（增加值/减少值）,while the number/percentage of（变化主体B）has been witnessed on a decline/rise of（减少值/增加值）.可以看到，可以看到，B B稳步上升稳步上升/下降了下降了，而，而A A经历了一个下降经历了一个下降/上升上升模板句模板句2：By comparison with（变化主体（变化主体B）,the number/percentage of（变化主体A）jumped/dropped from（最低值/最高值）to（最高值/最低值）during（多少年）.与与B B相比，相比，A A的数据在的数据在年间从年间从上升上升/下降到下降到小白考研小白考研4 真题演练One can see that the numbe of mobile phone subscription in developing countries has been on a steady(改为：改为：slowly)rise of 0.3 billion,while the number in developing countries has been witnessed on a(增加：增加：sharply)rise of 3.7%.By comparison with mobile phone subscription in developed countries,the number in developing countries jumped from 0.3%to 4%during 8 years.小白考研2012年真题1.1.什么变化？什么变化？2.2.各个主体？各个主体？employees employees under 40under 40 employees employees aged 41-50aged 41-50employees employees over the age of 50over the age of 504 真题演练 增减：多主体变化+变化趋势不同模板句模板句1：One can see that the number/percentage of（变化主体A）has been on a steady rise/decline of（增加值/减少值）,while the number/percentage of（变化主体B）has been witnessed on a decline/rise of（减少值/增加值）.可以看到，可以看到，B B稳步上升稳步上升/下降了下降了，而，而A A经历了一个下降经历了一个下降/上升上升模板句模板句2：By comparison with（变化主体（变化主体B）,the number/percentage of（变化主体A）jumped/dropped from（最低值/最高值）to（最高值/最低值）during（多少年）.与与B B相比，相比，A A的数据在的数据在年间从年间从上升上升/下降到下降到小白考研4 真题演练模板句模板句1 1：Employees,under 40,who are satisfied with their jobs makes up 16.7%,people aged 41-50 constitutes 0%,with people over 50 accounting for 40%.A A占占，B B占了占了，C C占了占了，而，而D D和和E E则各自占了则各自占了和和模板句模板句2：Compared with employees,under 40,who are satisfied with their jobs and people aged 41-50,those over 50 took the biggest account for 40%.相比相比B B，C C和和，A A占了最大的比例，它的比例是占了最大的比例，它的比例是Dream is what maks you happy,even when you are just trying.梦想就是一种让你感到坚持就是幸福的东西。凡有所学，皆成性格小白考研