英语⼀一作⽂文模板第⼀一段(深度挖掘、变化素材)英语⼀⼤作⽂⾸段模板⼀:①Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!②Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,描述1(图画概述).③Whatimpressesmemostisthat(=Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat)描述2(图画重点信息).④Simpleastheimageis,theimplicationsmirroredareapparently/conspicuouslyfar-reaching.模板⼆:①Thecartoonsubtlyandsymbolicallydepictsathought-provokingscenarioinwhich描述1.②Furtherexaminationrevealsthat描述2./②However,aquickglanceat___revealsironicallythat描述2.模板三:①Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,描述1.②Themoststrikingfeatureis描述2(图画重点信息).③Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.补充1)有关图画的名词sketch/drawing/cartoon/caricature/diagram/picture/painting/portrait/portrayal2)描述图画的形容词thought-provoking发⼈深省的enlightening有启迪作⽤/使⼈感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引⼈注⽬/引起兴趣profound含义深刻=far-reachingimplicationsinstructive有益的(=informative)(搭配ADV:extremely,highly,most,particularly,very/quite)ridiculous/preposterous荒谬可笑的;amusingilluminating(particularlyrevealingorhelpful)富有启发性的;很有助益的;impressive印象深刻的,exaggerative夸张的3)描述图画的动词describe/depict/illustrate/present/portray/demonstrate4)修饰动词的副词:graphically/vividly⽣动地(⽊易不推荐使⽤哦),symbolically象征性地,conspicuously/clearly/explicitly清晰地,subtly巧妙地,精细地,ironically/sarcastically/satirically讽刺地,humorously补充两种描述图画的简单句型(与作⽂课讲解不同,作⽂班的同学当作额外补充):句型1:(主谓版)主体(+定从)+动作+客体(+定从)例:Inthepicture,weareworriedtofindthatthegodofdeathissittingmaliciouslyonabuswhosedriverdozedoffwhiledriving.Itclearlytellsusthatinthedomainoftransportation,therearehiddendangerseverywhereshouldwebecomecareless.句型2:(therebe版)Thereis/are主体(+定从)例:Thepictureunveilsadrasticchangeofoceanecologyduringthepastcenturyduetotheexpandingscaleofworldcommercialfishing.Therewerefewfishingshipson...