24终极作文模板【英语一】.pdf

公众号：晶婷老师公众号：晶婷老师1Step 1：先看有没有大标题（图画最下面）直接确定图画主旨（也有没有的 2021；没有直接体现主旨 2019）Step 2：再看图中人物有没有对话；旁白；内心独白 对应图画主旨Step 3：一幅图：找核心人物/事物（哪个最突出；第一个说话的人 事件起因）确定其地理位置（实在找不到就是地面上）、神情、动作；再找次要事物/人物两幅图：先去描述左边；再描述右边Step 4：思考主旨&万能原因之间的怎么构建关系Introduction:“I”图画描述段。图画描述段。5-6 行行第第 1 句：图画总体描述；句：图画总体描述；第第 2-3 句：图画细节描述，挖掘细节词、联词成句；句：图画细节描述，挖掘细节词、联词成句；第第 4 句：图画如有标题，用一句话翻译标题，没有就不用句：图画如有标题，用一句话翻译标题，没有就不用写写Body：“B”主体主体/拓展段，意拓展段，意义阐述段。义阐述段。11-12 行行第第 1 句：主题句；句：主题句；第第 2-4 句：因果论证；句：因果论证；原因一原因一/原因二原因二/原因三原因三Conclusion：“C”提出建议提出建议/写影写影响。响。4-5 行行第第 1 句：结论句；句：结论句；第第 2-3 句：提出建议句：提出建议/写影响；写影响；第第 3-4 句：包装结尾，展望未来句：包装结尾，展望未来P1:一幅图What springs from this（一幅图）cartoon is such a scene：公众号：晶婷老师公众号：晶婷老师2On the ground/in the office/beside the table sit（s）/stand（s）/lie（s）a youngster/anadolescent/a man/an elderly man/four youngsters，非谓语（神情；说话），whov/is/are v-ing/v-ed+次要事物，（还需要描述一下就描述；字数够了就不写了）.两幅图Two extraordinary and meaningful drawings unfold before our eyes：两幅图：主 1，非谓语写说话内容或者动作，谓 1 宾 1 in the left drawing,while 主2，非谓语，谓 2 宾 2 in another cartoon.文字说明 The caption indicates，“.”字数要求：5-6 行一定注意描图句不能太简单不能太短P2：100-120 words 10-12 行行 Common as it is at first glance,this picture is brimming with illumination afteryour/my serious pondering：individuals are bound to put value on 主题词，whichcan be accounted for as follows.经 济：Initially,hardly a week goes by without some advance in technology/economy and society,which would have seemed incredible fifty years ago.Facing thepluralistic and fast-developing society,many individuals,if not most，are becomingincreasingly adj.（profit-oriented；ethic-oriented）,which triggers the fact that theyneglect/emphasize 主旨词/which gives them an economic basis to do sth.+数据In light of a recent survey/the data published by NBS（National Bureau of Statisticsof China）,xx%of folks,approximately,claim that 句子（与图中做法一致），灰色部分可以考虑省略社会风气：Simultaneously,the undesirable/desirable general mood of societyshould shoulder the blame/be one of the contributors,such as _ and its like.媒体行为：All kinds of publicity,be they newspapers or the Internet,advocate vigorously whatreally counts is 主旨词,prompting dwellers to do sth.个人Last but not least，especially significant is 主题词，which，for everyone，helpsus reach the other shore of true happiness/success.A proper example is YuanLongping，a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator,whose success stems largelyfrom his emphasis on 主题词.公众号：晶婷老师公众号：晶婷老师3【晶婷老师说】：四个选择 2-3 个即可，主要是要符合字数要求。P3：50 words 5-6 行行Altogether,主旨词 is of the essence and more needs to be done（好）/countermeasures should be taken immediately so as to reverse the grim situation（不好）/sth proves to be a double-edged sword（双刃剑）.Life is like a colossal ship sailing on the sea,in which at any moment we will meetstorms or reefs,but if we insist on 主题词,the ship of life will never sink.（好）/the fundamental approach to solve this problem is to launch extensive education onsocial morality,making people truly aware of the significance of 主题词（不好）/Supposing that folks imbue themselves with intelligence,prudence and discretion,they are bound to sidestep the potential drawbacks of _ as well as take advantage ofall the merits（双刃剑）.Lets prepared and embrace the harmonious and disciplined society constructed byour joint efforts.