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lesson 3论说文:线上图书馆主讲老师:张芷瑜微博/小红书/抖音:阿达老师Ada公众号:阿达的英语角听课小贴士 跟上思路 卡顿重进 记笔记左上角下载课件n 课程回顾课次内容题型话题方向思路模板1口头表达能力一般类2倾听他人的意见名言作文论说文考点1：正面话题全文围绕一个重要的：能力/事情/习惯/行为/品质/意识开头段：引出主题+表明立场主体段：importance+how to结尾段：重申立场 根据题目要求有侧重v 前两节课小结讲义P6预告原因_ 是相当重要的原因如下。The reasons why _ is of considerable importance are as follows.原因1【有好处】首先,得到普遍认同的是 _ 利于 _。In the first place,It would be universally acknowledged that _ is beneficial to _.原因2【有好处】此外,没有人能否认 _可以在 _中发挥关键作用。In addition,no one could deny the fact that _ can play a key role in _.原因 3【_】最后,毫无疑问,_ 能为 _ 打下坚实的基础。Lastly,there is no doubt that _ can lay a solid foundation for _.思路模板1:论述 importance(主题重要的原因)讲义P7预告建议那么如何 做某事?Then how to do sth?建议1也许第一步是个人需要做某事。Perhaps the first step is that individuals need to do sth.建议2另一个必要的步骤是做某事。Another necessary step is doing sth.建议3最后,建议某人做某事。Lastly,it is suggested that sb do sth.总结建议把以上方法结合,我们可以达到这个目的。By combining above methods,we can achieve the aim.思路模板 2:论述建议Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the use of online library.Youcan start your essay with the sentence Online library is becoming increasingly popular.”(2020.09)审题(1)主题:(2)方向：(3)任务：提纲开头段：主体段：结尾段：本节课讲义P14u 审题小结讲义P14写作主题一个重要的 能力/事情/习惯/行为/品质/意识题干特征importance/题目方向+写作任务Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the use of online library.Youcan start your essay with the sentence Online library is becoming increasingly popular.”(2020.09)审题(1)主题:(2)方向：(3)任务：提纲开头段：主体段：结尾段：本节课l 开头段:引出主题+表明立场Directions:.to write an essay on the use of online library.You can start your essay with the sentenceOnline library is becoming increasingly popular.”(2020.9 卷一)l 开头段:引出主题+表明立场近年来，_ 的人越来越多。Directions:.to write an essay on the use of online library.You can start your essay with the sentence Onlinelibrary is becoming increasingly popular.”(2020.9 卷一)l 开头段:引出主题+表明立场近年来，使用在线图书馆的人越来越多。In recent years,the number of people who use online library is increasing.Recent years have witnessed the increase in the number of people who do sth.【句式升级】l 开头段:引出主题+表明立场近年来，使用在线图书馆的人越来越多。In recent years,the number of people who use online library is increasing.Recent years have witnessed the increase in the number of people who use online library.【句式升级】l 开头段：引出主题+表明立场_,recent years have witnessed the increase in thenumber of people who use online library.随着科技的快速发展,近年来使用在线图书馆的人越来越多。l 开头段：引出主题+表明立场With technology developing at a rapid rate,recent years have witnessed the increase inthe number of people who use online library.随着科技的快速发展,近年来使用在线图书馆的人越来越多。l 开头段：引出主题+表明立场With technology developing at a rapid rate,recent years have witnessed the increase in the numberof people who use online library.+个人立场随着科技的快速发展,近年来使用在线图书馆的人越来越多。+个人立场l 开头段：引出主题+表明立场随着科技的快速发展,近年来使用在线图书馆的人越来越多。对这一现象的看法因人而异。在我看来，_。l 开头段：引出主题+表明立场对这一现象的看法因人而异。在我看来，这一趋势背后的原因是多方面的,且使用在线图书馆有利有弊。l 开头段：引出主题+表明立场对这一现象的看法因人而异。在我看来，这一趋势背后的原因是多方面的,且使用在线图书馆有利有弊。Opinions on this phenomenon vary from person to person.From my point of view,reasons behind the trend arevarious and there are both advantages and disadvantages in using online library.l 开头段:引出主题+表明立场With technology developing at a rapid rate,recent years have witnessed the increase in thenumber of people who use online library.Opinions on this phenomenon vary from person toperson.From my point of view,reasons behind the trend are various and there are bothadvantages and disadvantages in using online library.随着科技的快速发展,近年来使用在线图书馆的人数不断增加。对这一现象的看法因人而异。在我看来，这一趋势背后的原因是多方面的,且使用在线图书馆有利有弊。52词u开头段模板:引出主题【现象】+表明立场With technology developing at a rapid rate,recent years have witnessed the increase in the numberof people who do sth.Opinions on this phenomenon vary from person to person.From my point ofview,reasons behind the trend are various and there are both advantages and disadvantages insth/doing sth.随着科技的快速发展,近年来做某事的人数不断增加。对这一现象的看法因人而异。在我看来，这一趋势背后的原因是多方面的,且 某事/做某事 有利有弊。讲义P15 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证如何论证？利+弊 正方观点：线上图书馆的利 反方观点：主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证利+弊 正方观点：线上图书馆的利（带来的好处/好影响）反方观点：线上图书馆的弊（带来的问题/坏结果）主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 正方观点：“online library”的利On the one hand,some people hold the view that _.To be specific,they claimthat _.一方面，有些人认为_。具体地说，他们声称_。便利:convenient adj.便利的/convenience n.便利性 高效:effective adj.高效的/high efficiency 便宜:affordable adj.经济的 体验:better user experience 更好的用户体验/user-friendly 用户友好的q 论述科技的利v 思路讲义P17 便利:convenient adj.便利的/convenience n.便利性 高效:effective adj.高效的/high efficiency 便宜:affordable adj.经济的 体验:better user experience 更好的用户体验/user-friendly 用户友好的q 论述科技的利v 思路v 句式：某科技真的为我们提供了更 _ 和 _的选择来做某事。_ have/has really offered more _ and _ choices for us to do sth.讲义P17 正方观点：“online library”的利 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。讲义P16On the one hand,some people hold the view that digital libraries have really offered moreconvenient and affordable choices for us to read.一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。正方观点：“online library”的利 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证讲义P16On the one hand,some people hold the view that digital libraries have really offered moreconvenient and affordable choices for us to read.To be specific,they claim that _.正方观点：“online library”的利 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证讲义P16一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。具体地说，他们声称 _。To be specific,they claim that _.正方观点：“online library”的利 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证讲义P16一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。具体地说，他们声称读者有大量触手可得的阅读机会。一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。具体地说，他们声称读者有大量触手可得的阅读机会。正方观点：“online library”的利 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证On the one hand,some people hold the view that digital libraries have really offered moreconvenient and affordable choices for us to read.To be specific,they claim that readers areflooded with reading opportunities at their fingertips.主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊但另一方面，伴随好处有一些问题。主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊But on the other hand,there are problems accompanying the benefits.但另一方面，伴随好处有一些问题。句型回顾利弊.is beneficial to.is d_ to.can exert a positive influence on.can.句型回顾利弊.is beneficial to.is detrimental to.can exert a positive influence on.can have an adverse effect on.拓展社交圈：widen social circle 取得职业成功：achieve career success 提高学业成绩：improve academic performance 拓展视野：widen horizons 丰富知识：expand knowledge 提高批判思维：improve critical thinking 提高人际交往能力：improve interpersonal skills 促使身心健康：breed physical health and mental well-being语料回顾:万能好处 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊首先，得到普遍认同的是 _对 _有害。此外，_ 会对 _产生不利影响。o 具体的坏处 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊o 具体的坏处得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。此外，在线阅读会对养成良好的阅读习惯和提高阅读技能产生不利影响。First,it would be universally acknowledged that _ is detrimental to _.Besides,online reading can exert an adverse influence on _ and _.主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。此外，在线阅读会对养成良好的阅读习惯和提高阅读技能产生不利影响。First,it would be universally acknowledged that spending too much time reading online is detrimental tophysical health.Besides,online reading can exert an adverse influence on developing a good readinghabit and improving reading skills.o 具体的坏处 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊首先，得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。一些研究人员发现 _ 的人会 _。Some researchers found that people who _ will _.论证 主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊首先，得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。Some researchers found that people who_ will_.论证一些研究人员发现睡前在 iPad 等平板电脑上阅读电子书的人会发现很难入睡。主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证 反方观点：“online library”的弊但另一方面，伴随好处有一些问题。得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。一些研究人员发现睡前在 iPad 等平板电脑上阅读电子书的人会发现很难入睡。此外，在线阅读会对养成良好的阅读习惯和提高阅读技能产生不利影响。But on the other hand,there are problems accompanying the benefits.First,it would be universallyacknowledged that spending too much time reading online is detrimental to physical health.Someresearchers found that people who read e-books on tablets like the iPad before bed will find it difficult tofall asleep.Besides,online reading can exert an adverse influence on developing a good reading habitand improving reading skills.主体段:围绕“online library”展开论证一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。具体地说，他们声称读者有大量触手可得的阅读机会。但另一方面，伴随好处有一些问题。得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。一些研究人员发现睡前在 iPad 等平板电脑上阅读电子书的人会发现很难入睡。此外，在线阅读会对养成良好的阅读习惯和提高阅读技能产生不利影响。v利弊分析On the one hand,some people hold the view that _.To be specific,they claimthat _.But on the other hand,there are problems accompanying the benefits.First,itwould be universally acknowledged that _ is detrimental to _.Besides,_ canexert an adverse influence on _.一方面，有些人认为_。具体地说，他们声称_。但另一方面，伴随好处有一些问题。首先，人们普遍认为 _ 对 _ 有害。此外，_ 会对 _ 产生不利影响。q 主体段模板：利弊分析综上所述，_ 有利有弊,我强烈建议每个人,尤其是 _,做某事。结尾段：重申立场In conclusion,_ can bring both benefits and drawbacks and I highly suggest that everyone,especially _,do sth.结尾段：重申立场In conclusion,_ can bring both benefits and drawbacks and I highly suggest that everyone,especially _ do sth.总之,在线阅读有利有弊，我强烈建议每个人，尤其是学生以合理的方式使用在线图书馆。结尾段：重申立场总之,在线阅读有利有弊，我强烈建议每个人,尤其是学生以合理的方式使用在线图书馆。In conclusion,online reading can bring both benefits and drawbacks and I highly suggest thateveryone,especially students use online library in a reasonable way.作业1：5步法背诵范文Step 1英翻中 梳理不熟悉的词句Step 2全篇背 每句话的功能+句间逻辑Step 3中翻英 检验词句Step 4做比对(译文 VS 范文)总结错误Step 5背模板 理解功能句作业2：根据中文，完成主体段一方面，有些人认为数字图书馆真的为我们提供了更方便和经济的选择来阅读。具体地说，他们声称读者有大量触手可得的阅读机会。但另一方面，伴随好处有一些问题。得到普遍认同的是花太多时间在网上阅读对身体健康有害。一些研究人员发现睡前在 iPad 等平板电脑上阅读电子书的人会发现很难入睡。此外，在线阅读会对养成良好的阅读习惯和提高阅读技能产生不利影响。微博/小红书/抖音:阿达老师Ada