七年级英语上册 Unit 3 How was your school trip？写作专项讲解课件 .ppt

writing,Unit 3 How was your school trip?,Writing Aims:,1.Be able to describe your tripwith the right tense.(能够运用正确的时态描述你的一次旅行)2.To enjoy the fun of life.（学会享受生活的乐趣）,My trip,went to the zoo,rode a horse,ate delicious food,visited the museum,saw some animals,took some photos,Talk about something about your trip on summer vacation.Make a conversation in groups.,Where did you go?What did you do?How was the trip/the weather?,Group Work,June 23rdYesterday my school visited the zoo.It was really _.We went there by bus.At the zoo,I saw a lot of _ and I took some photos.My classmates and I also went to the _ and bought some _.It was a great day.,3a,June 23rdMy school went to the zoo yesterday.The trip was _.At the zoo,I _ but I didnt like them.I also went to _ with my classmates,but I didnt buy anything because _.It was a boring day.,interesting,animals,gift shop,gifts,boring,saw many animals,the gift shop,they were so expensive,Yesterday my school visited the zoo.It was really interesting.We went there by bus.At the zoo,I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos.My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.It was a great day.,How did Bob talk about his trip?,（总）,（分）,（总）,I went on a school trip./I had a trip to,Talk about“the trip to Shanghai”on your summer vacation,All in all,It was an exciting trip./I liked the trip very much./I was tired but happy.,I went on a school trip./I had a trip to,weatherwherewhoHow Feelings(感受),All in all,It was an exciting trip./I liked the trip very much./I was tired but happy.,（总）,（分）,（总）,Talk about“the trip to Shanghai”on your summer vacation,A trip to Shanghai,先小组讨论文章脉络，然后小组每人2-3句，组成一篇完整的文章。,注意,假期期间你到哪里旅行了？请你运用所学语言谈谈你自己的旅程。注意文章的结构与时态的运用。,开放性作文,指令性作文,要注意语言的连贯性及文章的基本结构，还要注意时态的正确运用哦！,提示,评价标准,注意：先对照评价内容进行自评、补充，然后组内互评（1号 4号,2号 3号）,A档：六项内容齐全，错误3处以内。B档：含5项内容，错误在5处以内。C档：含4项内容，错误在7处以内。,1号：A档达标。3、4号学生：C档达标。2号：B档达标。,达标标准,Who wants to show yourself？积极推荐展示组内的优秀作文吧,晒一晒,Can you talk about your trip?（你学会如何描述自己的一次旅行了吗？）Can you learn something from others compositions?（你能通过学习别人的作文而有所收获吗？）,查一查,Love our life and enjoy our life.,