江苏省句容市后白中学九年级英语上册 Unit 4 Growing up Task课件 .ppt

,9A Unit 4 Task The person who has influenced me most,Free talk,The person who has influenced you most,n.调查，研究,You will not learn more about her until you do some research.,She devoted much of her lifetime to doing charity work.,kind and helpful,Whenever she had some time left,she was always willing to help children in poor areas.,To her surprise,She discovered that she had cancer in 1991.,after her death,has a heart full of love,The person who has influenced me most,who,How old,Looks,where,what,how,1 Who has influenced you most in your life?,2 What does he/she look like?,3 What is special about him/her?,4 What has he/she done?Give one or two examples.,5 What do you think of him/her?,Try to discuss,Lets read an article on Page 60.,Try to answer,1 Who has influenced the writer most?,2 What does her father look like?,3 What is her father like?,4 What has her father done since 1990?,5 What does the writer think of her father now?,My father is in his fifties.He has worked in a local factory for years.You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.,Paragraph 1,1 Who has influenced the writer most?,2 What does her father look like?,My father has always been kind and helpful.he is ready to help anyone.He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one;he cares for the children who have lost their parents;whenever he has some money left,he gives it to someone in need.,Paragraph 2,3 What is her father like?,My father has donated blood many times since 1990.The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives.He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer.To my surprise,he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.,Paragraph 3,4 What has her father done since 1990?,When I was a little girl,I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family.Now I realized that he has a heart full of love.,Paragraph 4,5 What does the writer think of her father now?,Paragraph()_,Paragraph()_,Paragraph()_,1,2-3,4,Your feelings,Qualities&examples,Personal information,My father has always been kind and helpful.he is ready to help anyone.He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one;he cares for the children who have lost their parents;whenever he has some money left,he gives it to someone in need.,Paragraph 2,topic sentence（主题句）,supporting sentences（支撑句）,My father has donated blood many times since 1990.The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives.He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer.To my surprise,he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.,Paragraph 3,Tip,use some transitional words（连接词）,When I was a little girl,I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family.Now I realized that he has a heart full of love.,Paragraph 4,learn to use clauses（使用从句）,What makes a good report?,a _ structure,_ sentence_ sentence_ sentence,some _ expressions,some _words,clear,topic,supporting,concluding,different,transitional,（清晰的文章结构）,（主题句）,（支撑句）,（结尾句）,（多样的表达）,（使用连接词）,Paragraph 1,Paragraph 2,Paragraph 3,Writing time,以“The person who has influenced me most”为题写一篇作文。,Personal information,Qualities&examples,Your feelings,要求：,所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。,2.文章不少于80词。,Evaluation time(评价时间),评价标准：段落分明，要点齐全，时态恰当，结构正确，句式多样，过渡自然，观点合理，书写规范。在保证正确的前提下，多用层次高的同义词、句。,Self-editing:(自我修改)Check your reports by yourselves,find out the mistakes and try to correct.,Evaluation time(评价时间),2.Peer-editing:(相互修改)Share your reports with your partners,check his/her report and give a mark.(10分制)Give him/her some advice.,评分标准：满分10分1段落不清晰，扣1分2 时态错误,扣1分3 要点遗漏，每条扣1分4 句式简单、重复，扣1分5 没有适当的过渡语，扣1分6 书写不规范，扣1分7 语法，拼写错误，每处扣0.5分,Continue to edit your draft and share your favorite version with your partners.,Homework,Through hard work,size and body type doesnt matter you can do almost anything if you never give up.,