3、 阐述现象型作文.pptx

现象阐述型作文讲解,写作思路,模板分析,范文讲解,目录 CONTENTS,第一段（描述段）写作思路,1.开门见山，总述现象；2.阐述现象的具体表现或变化。,第二段（说明段）写作思路：,1.承上启下，引出原因/因素/影响；2.具体阐述原因一；3.具体阐述原因二；4.具体阐述原因三；5.总结以上原因或因素导致的结果/该现象的最终影响。,第三段（议论段）写作思路：,1.“我”对此现象的思考或看法；2.进一步说明自己的看法或理由；3.总结全文。,第一段模板分析：,1.Nowadays,there exists a social(an economic/an environmental)phenomenon that+具体现象,which has aroused/has given rise to/has resulted in/has brought about great concern among people around us.当今社会，存在着一种社会/经济/环境现象，这在我们周围的人中引起了广泛关注./具体现象+has increasingly become a common concern of the public.这个.现象越来越受到公众的关注.2.According to a survey/study/research,+调查内容说明这种现象（举例说明）.根据调查.,第二段模板分析：,1.There are a couple of reasons booming this phenomenon.有很多原因导致这个现象。2.First of all,+原因一；首先.3.Whats more,+原因二；其次.4.In addition/Additionally,+原因三；除此之外.5.As a result,+结果。结果.,第三段模板分析：,1.As far as I am concerned/As to me/In my opinion/I hold the view that+“我”的观点；就我个人而言，我持有.观点。2.Furthermore,+进一步说明；并且.3.Therefore,from the above/based on the above discussion I can come to the conclusion that+最终结论。因此，综上所述，我得出.结论.,范文分析：,1.现代城市中持卡的人越来越多；2.原因在于.;3.你对此有什么看法。,范文分析：(第一段）,Nowadays,holding cards has become a common phenomenon.According to a survey,over 80%of people in big cities hold various kinds of cards issued by banks,restaurants,supermarkets and so on.,范文分析：(第二段）,There are a number of reasons booming this phenomenon.First of all,it is convenient to consume by cards.Whats more,Its safer to carry cards than cash.For example,if ones cards are lost,the owner neednt worry too much because no one else can get the money out without the password.,范文分析：(第二段）,In addition,cards can give card holders certain privilege or discount in service.Therefore,holding cards,especially among the youth,becomes fashionable recently.,范文分析：(第三段）,As for me,cards have a bright future.With the development of science and technology,cards will become much safer and easier to use.Therefore,it can be concluded that more people will use cards.,Homework(2014年考题),1.近年来，许多经典名著被改写成各种版本以供大众娱乐。2.这种现象产生的原因。3.经典名著被改写可能产生的问题以及你的看法。Useful expressions:classics n.经典名著 adapt v.改编adaptation n.改编，改编本edition/version n.版本,