【中考写作指导】中考英语（人教）写作话题汇总复习：健康与急救（共21张PPT）.ppt

第三部分 高频话题写作指导,八年级（下）Units 1-2,健康与急救,写作导图 分析近3年湖南42套中考真题可知，湖南各地市非常重视对该话题的考查，且考查频次很高。该话题的命题角度主要为：,1.如何保持身体健康。如：2013湘西中考真题关注青少年的体质，要求考生以“How to keep healthy“为题，写一篇短文，谈论体质下降的原因，并给出健康建议；2013湘潭中考真题要求针对青少年的肥胖问题，以“Advice on keeping away from overweight（超重）”为题，给出建议帮助解决肥胖问题；2012衡阳中考真题要求以“A Healthy Lifestyle”为题写一篇短文；2012岳,阳中考真题要求以“Save(节约)Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇短文号召节约人们粮食，健康饮食；2012郴州中考真题要求以“Lets Do Exercise Together”为题，给出锻炼身体的建议等。,2.如何保障个人人身安全。如：2013岳阳中考真题为了增强和提高青少年的自我安全保护意识，要求考生以“How to Be Safe”为题，写出生活中常见的安全注意事项。下面以2013湘西中考真题为例分析此话题：,Dont stay up,How to keephealthy,Diet,Exercise,Sleep,Dont eat too much rich food,like meat,Eat fruits and vegetables,Drink milk,No junk food,Run,Play basketball,Do yoga,Go to bed and get up early,亮点句型速成常用句型：A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.推荐句型：A nurse gave me an injection which was a little painful.常用句型：You mustnt smoke.Its bad for your health.推荐句型：You mustnt smoke because its bad for your health.,开头句：1.It is very important to keep healthy.2.Nowadays,more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.3.Health means much wealth to everyone.,中间句：1.We cant go to sleep too late.We cant get up too late.2.We should eat the food healthily.3.We should do more exercise.4.In the doctors office,the doctor looks me over carefully.,5.He told me to take a rest and drink more water.6.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.,7.A few days later,I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.8.A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health.,结尾句：Its easy to have a healthy lifestyle,and its important to eat a balanced diet.2.If you follow my advice,you will be in a good health.3.I hope everyone can keep in good health.,（常用词汇见本书“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（十三）卫生与健康）,写作模板 Nowadays,more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.For me,there are 几种方法 to keep healthy.First,it is necessary to 做法一；Secondly,we shouldnt 做法二；Thirdly,it is important to 做法三.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit,they will 健康会有怎样的改善.,典例剖析（13湘西）近20年来各方面调查表明青少年体质的下降令人担忧。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇6080词的短文，说说你的看法和建议。要求：主要包括以下内容，可以适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。1.体质下降的原因;如：eat too much junk food,have too much homework.,2.合理的健康建议。如：some useful advice,should do more exercise,eat a balanced diet（饮食平衡),enough sleep.How to Keep Healthy Nowadays students physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year.I think there are some reasons._,【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：文章应首先根据内容提示写出体质下降的原因，可用一般现在时表述，人称可用第一人称和第三人称；2.就“保持健康”提出建议，所写建议尽量全面，涉及内容尽量多角度，深层次，文体为说明文。,【高分范文】How to Keep Healthy Nowadays students physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year.I think there are some reasons.Students have too much homework to do,so they have little time to have sports.Some students eat too much junk food.Thats also bad for their health.,Then,how to keep healthy?Firstly,it is necessary to keep a balanced diet.We arent supposed to eat too much junk food.It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day.Whats more,we are supposed to have meals regularly.Secondly,we shouldnt stay up too late.,Getting enough sleep is also necessary.Thirdly,it is important to take regular exercises,such as swimming,jogging and so on.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit,theyll greatly improve their health.I hope everyone can keep in good health.,【检测菜单】1.应该做某事 _2.熬夜 _3.做某事很重要 _4.保持健康 _,be supposed to,stay up,it is important to,keep in good health,