2023学年新教材高中英语Unit5Ontheroad单元写作练习外研版必修第二册.doc

单元写作 写作五步成文(应用文) [2023年·曲阜师大附中期中]假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在春节期间要到曲阜游玩，同时约你一起去逛三孔(即孔府、孔庙和孔林)。请根据下列要点给他写封电子邮件。要点： 1．表示欢迎； 2．接受邀请； 3．行程安排。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：孔府the Confucius Mansion；孔庙the Confucius Temple；孔林the Confucius Cemetery Dear Tom， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to seeing you! Yours， Li Hua 步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻是前提 一、审题 1．确定体裁：本文为应用文，要求写电子邮件(旅行计划)。 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一、二人称。 3．确定时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 二、构思 第一段：表示欢迎，接受邀请。 第二段：旅行安排(第一天参观孔府和孔庙，然后参观孔林、品尝小吃)。 第三段：表达愿望。 步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全 1．more_than_glad　　　　　　　　　非常高兴 2．express_a_warm_welcome_to... 对……表示热烈欢迎 3．on_the_first_day 第一天 4．take_pictures 照相 5．pay_a_visit_to... 参观…… 6．far_away_from 离……远 7．enjoy_delicious_local_food 品尝当地美食 8．have_a_good_time 玩得愉快 步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现 1．我非常高兴你打算来曲阜参观。(主系表＋其他成分) I'm_very_glad_to_learn_that_you_plan_to_come_to_Qufu_for_a_visit. 2．我对你表示热烈的欢迎。(主谓宾) I_will_express_a_warm_welcome_to_you. 3．第一天我们要参观孔府和孔庙。(主谓宾状) We'll_visit_the_Confucius_Mansion_and_the_Confucius_Temple_on_the_first_day. 4．我们可以拍照并购买礼物。(主谓宾) We_can_take_some_pictures_and_buy_some_gifts. 5．我们可以乘公共汽车参观孔林。(主谓宾状) We_can_pay_a_visit_to_the_Confucius_Cemetery_by_bus. 6．它离市中心很远。(主系表＋其他成分) It's_far_away_from_the_center_of_the_city. 7．你可以品尝当地的美食。(主谓宾) You_can_enjoy_the_delicious_local_food. 步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点 1．用more than升级第1句 I'm_more_than_glad_to_learn_that_you_plan_to_come_to_Qufu_for_a_visit. 2．用where把第3、4句升级为含定语从句的复合句 We'll_visit_the_Confucius_Mansion_and_the_Confucius_Temple_on_the_first_day,_where_we_can_take_some_pictures_and_buy_some_gifts. 3．用because把第5、6句升级为含原因状语从句的复合句 We_can_pay_a_visit_to_the_Confucius_Cemetery_by_bus_because_it's_far_away_from_the_center_of_the_city. 4．用such as丰富第7句 You can enjoy the delicious local food, such as jiaozi and smoked tofu. 步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇(可能会用到for the following days, at the same time等词语) Dear Tom， I'm more than glad to learn that you plan to come to Qufu for a visit this Spring Festival. So first I will express a warm welcome to you and I am willing to be with you. We'll visit the Confucius Mansion and the Confucius Temple on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts. For the following days, we can pay a visit to the Confucius Cemetery by bus because it's far away from the center of the city. At the same time, you can enjoy the delicious local food, such as jiaozi and smoked tofu and do some shopping. I hope you can have a good time in Qufu. Looking forward to seeing you! Yours， Li Hua - 3 -