专题03 九全Unit 3 写作主题：游览（人教版）.docx

更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址： 人教版九全册Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are？ 写作主题：游览 一、话题分析 本单元的话题围绕“游览”为话题，要求我们在游览出行时，能够得体地运用礼貌语句指路、问路等。与此相关的写作任务是能够根据图示或文字提示简单介绍去某地的路线。写作时，注意线路介绍顺序要清晰，能正确运用所学的指路句型，语言要简洁明了。命题者一般是针对假期旅行或学校组织的集体外出活动来设计试题，要求考生对活动的过程、所见所闻以及自身感受进行描述。通常会涉及旅行目的、旅行地点、必备物品、出发时间、出行方式及旅行路线(包括问路和使用地图)等。此类试题通常以文字、图画提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。这类文章多用一般过去时。 二、 写作方法 “一间二介三期待”写指路类文章 1． 问候。引人“指路”话题。 2． 介绍。详细地介绍行走路线。 3． 期待。希望对方按指定路线到达目的地。 三、词汇积累 路线指导类作文常用词汇： restroom, beside, bathroom, central, east, address pardon me, suggest, politely, polite, direct, impolite request, corner, direction, underground, pass by. go along, turn left/right, go straight 四、句型积累 路线指导类作文常用句型： 1. Excuse me, could you please tell me how to get to...? 2. Just go along.. .until you pass... 3. I'm coming to your school for... 4. I'd like to know about... 5. I wonder if you... 6. Walk along this street. It's next to/across from/behind the ... 7. Take the first/second turning on the left/right. 8. It's (not) far from here.You can't miss it. 【开头句】 1．The summer/winter vacation is coming soon and we've had a good plan for it． 2．I'm going to travel to some places of interest which can open my eyes． 3．We're planning to go to Beijing for a trip．But whether going there or not depends on the weather． 4．Our classmates are going to volunteer in a nursing home，where they can get some experience in taking care of the old． 【中间句】 1．You'll be sure to experience many new things when traveling． 2．The main reason for traveling is，perhaps for pleasure． 3．You can enjoy the beautiful scenery and relax yourselves by traveling． 4．Traveling not only makes us energetic but also broadens our horizons． 5．When we stayed there，we got lots of help from local people．They were friendly to us． 6．I help my parents do housework from time to time． 7．Besides，I often do some reading during my vacation because it can improve my writing． 【结尾句】 1．The vacation is unforgettable for me． 2．All of us felt tired but happy． 3．I'm sure I will have a great time during my winter vacation． 4．All in all，I hope all of us can have a wonderful vacation． 5．Only in this way can you enjoy your summer vacation happily． 五、写作训练一 【写作任务】(Section B 3a & 3b) 假如你叫张婷，今年暑假准备去英国的某所语言学校进行为期两周的游学，去之前你想了解一些相关信息。请你给这所学校的负责人写一封信，礼貌地询问你想知道的一些信息。 【思路点拨】 1. 定基调 体裁：应用文(书信) 时态：叙述自己的情况时用一般现在时，叙述将来发生的情况时用一般将来时 人称：第一人称 2. 谋布局、写句子 3. 巧衔接 在本文中，要想使询问的四条信息连贯，可以使用表示列举的连接手段如first, then, next, last / finally。这种运用连接性状语连句成篇的方法，也是使文章保持连贯的一种衔接手段。 4. 成篇章 Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Zhang Ting and I’m from Beijing, China. _____________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Zhang Ting 5. 化“平凡”为“非凡” I’d like to know where to eat and live. → I’d like to know where I will eat and whether I will stay in the dorm (学生宿舍) or with a host family 六、写作训练二 假如你校有儿位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线，并简单介绍一下公园的情况。 要点提示： 1. 路线（见上图）； 2. 公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等； 3. 表达愿望。 要求： 1．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计人总词数）； 2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 【思路点拨】 1．从体裁上来看，本文属于说明文。 2．文章的要点有三方面：描述线路；介绍目的地；表达愿望。 3．时态主要使用一般现在时。 4．审要点，列提纲 描述路线 Cuihu Park is not far from here ... Just go straight...turn right...walk along... Turn left... 介绍目的地 The park is really a good place to have fun....beautiful and cool ...You can swim... 表达愿望 You may also get a good chance... Cuihu Park is not far from here It's easy to get there. Just go straight______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、真题演练 (2020·甘孜州)假定你叫李华。你的笔友Peter发邮件说他打算暑假来四川旅游。请你用英语给他回复—封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示欢迎； 2．询问到达时间； 3．你的接待安排(如参观名胜古迹等)。 参考词汇：名胜古迹place of interest 注意： 1．内容必须包括所给信息； 2．词数：80左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3．可适当增加细节，不得出现个人真实信息。 【审题思路】 1．审主题：对笔友的暑假旅游安排 2．审人称：第二人称 3．审时态：一般将来时 4．审要点，列提纲 提纲要点 关键词句 开头：写信的目的 1．很高兴听说 I'm glad to hear that… 2．欢迎来四川旅行。 Welcome to Sichuan for traveling． 正文：来四川旅游的具体安排 1．带你参观四川的名胜古迹 show you around some places of interest in Sichuan 2．欣赏不同的自然风光 admire different wonderful natural scenery 3．环游城市很方便。 It's convenient to get around our city． 4．品尝各种四川美食 taste different kinds of Sichuan food 结尾：期待与祝愿 期待见到你 look forward to meeting you ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 人教版九全册Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are 写作主题：游览 五、写作训练一 答案 2. 谋布局、写句子 (1) Now I’m writing to ask for some information (2) I wonder about the whole plan for this study vacation (3) Could you please tell me what courses I’ll take (4) I wonder what activities I can do (5) I’m looking forward to your reply 【参考范文】 Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Zhang Ting and I’m from Beijing, China. I’ll be coming to your school for a two-week study vacation this summer. Now I’m writing to ask for some information about this study vacation. First, I wonder about the whole plan for this study vacation. Then, could you please tell me what courses I’ll take and how long each course will last? Next, I’d like to know where to eat and live. Last, I wonder what activities I can do to learn more about your culture. I would like to thank you for your help. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Ting 六、写作训练二 【参考范文】 Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you |find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on Syour right. Across from the park is a restaurant. The park is really a good place to have fun. It's beautiful and cool with many trees and flowers. You can swim, play games or have a picnic there. It's very, relaxing. You may also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will have fun. 七、真题演练 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I'm glad to hear that you'll travel to Sichuan during your summer vacation. Welcome to Sichuan for travelling. When are you going to arrive in Sichuan? When you come here, I'll show you around some places of interest in Sichuan. I'll take you to Qingcheng Mountain where you can admire different wonderful natural scenery. It's convenient to get around our city. You can find almost every kinds of transport here like buses, taxis, trains and subways which can take you anywhere you like. And you can taste different kinds of Sichuan food. Looking forward to meeting you here and best wishes to you. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址：