专题10
九全Unit10
写作主题:风俗礼仪人教版
专题
10
Unit10
写作
主题
风俗
礼仪
人教版
更多资料添加微信号:DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺:优尖升教育 网址:
人教版九全册Unit10 You’re supposed to shake hands.
写作主题:风俗礼仪
一、 话题分析
本单元话题是“风俗礼仪”,围绕这一话题谈论不同国家的礼仪,如见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等,谈论在不同的场合应该做什么,了解不同国家的文化习俗。要求同学们能简单介绍不同国家人们见面时的礼仪习俗及日常生活中的习俗。最能体现本单元话题以及语言运用能力的作文为介绍不同国家风俗习惯的短文、书信或邮件等。
二、 写作方法
“三步法”写“介绍风俗类”作文
第一步:总体介绍
第二步:分细节介绍
第三步:以祝福或期待收尾
三、素材积累
“介绍风俗类”作文常用语块:
见面礼仪
custom, meet, visit, should, be different from, shake hands, be (not) supposed to, be expected to, first,second.then, finally smile and say “nihao", not kiss or hug, ·introduce younger ones to older ones, introduce men to women
餐桌礼仪
start to eat until everyone is at the table, not start eating first if there are older people at the table, not stick your chopsticks into your food, lay your chopsticks on your plate or bowl, not point at anyone with your chopsticks,not make any noise when you eat your soup, not speak with your mouth full of food, not hit an empty bowl with your chopsticks, accept it when the host
待客与做客礼仪
serve some fruit, offer some tea, receive the gift / present with two hands, not open the gift / present until the guests leave, use serving chopsticks or spoons to give out food call first before visiting your friend, knock on the door before entering the room, not leave without saying goodbye, arrive on time, bring some gifts /presents, express your thanks to the hosts when you leave
“介绍风俗类”作文常用句型:
1. It's polite to...
2. It' s impolite / rude to ... ..
3. You should/shouldn't...
4. You' re (not) supposed to ...
5. You' re (not) expected to ...
6. It' s important to ...
7.Don't...
8.Never...
9. Remember (not) to ...
10. You' d better (not)...
11.One important thing is that …
12. Another example is that …
13. Also, … / What’s more, / besides, / for example, if, when, althouth, so…
“介绍风俗类”作文常用常用习语
When in Rome, do as Romans do.入乡随俗。
“After you” is good manners. “您先请”是礼貌。
Custom is the guide of the ignorant.习俗是无知者的向导。
Custom makes all things easy.若照习俗办,万事皆不难。
四、实例讲解
【写作任务】(Section B 3a&3b)
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mark要来中国学习一年,要寄宿在一个当地家庭。为了能很好地融入到寄宿家庭的生活中,他写信向你询问中国的礼仪习俗。请你根据要点提示给他写一封回信,从三个方面给他提一些建议。
要点提示:1. 吃饭时; 2. 在家时; 3. 约他人外出时。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(书信);信的主体部分为说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:回信主体内容是给别人提建议,所以应该以第二人称you为主。
2. 谋布局、写句子
3. 巧衔接
(1) 使用平行结构(It’s ... to ... 和Don’t ...)能使文章节奏匀称,这是使文章衔接的一种方法。
(2) 词汇的重复(be supposed to)和同义词的使用(be supposed to, should)也是使文章衔接的一种方法。
4. 成篇章
Dear Mark,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to —
In our house, you’re supposed to
When you go out with people, you should
Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”
We usually do that. You should follow our customs. → When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
五、写作训练一
假如你叫魏强,你的加拿大笔友Tony要来中国,并到中国朋友家做客。请你根据下面的提示给他写
一封电子邮件、向他介绍一下到中国家庭做客需要注意的礼仪。
初次见面:初次见面时,中国人一般握手
礼物: 可送水果和鲜花,但送人钟表是不礼貌的
就餐: 不要把筷子插入食物里面;不要用筷子指人
要求:1.必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥;
2.80词左右(电子邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数)。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六、写作训练二
假如你是王洁,你的美国朋友Jenny发电子邮件想向你了解中国的就餐文化,请你根据电子邮件内容回复她。
Dear Wang Jie,
I'm going to China. I will probably be invited to a dinner. But I'm worried about what I should and shouldn't do as a guest during the dinner. Please give me some advice.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jenny
要求:100词左右,电子邮件的格式、开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to China! Before you come, you should know about table manners in our country. Here is some advice.
___________________________
____________________________
I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other questions.
Yours,
Wang Jie
六、写作训练三
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Dale发来电子邮件,想了解中国人的一些社交习俗。请你根据以下要点提示给他回复一封电子邮件,从四个方面进行介绍。
要点提示:1. 与他人初次见面时; 2. 客人来访时; 3. 接受礼物时; 4. 赴宴时。
要求:1. 词数90左右,电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Dale,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce some Chinese customs to you.
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________
Anyhow, different cultures have different customs. Could you please tell me some customs in your country?
Yours,
Li Hua
人教版九全册Unit10 You’re supposed to shake hands.
写作主题:风俗礼仪
实例讲解
【参考范文】
2. 谋布局、写句子
(1) You’re supposed to / You should lay them on your plate or bowl
(2) Don’t make any noise when you eat your soup
(3) speak / talk to the old people politely
(4) you’re not supposed to / you shouldn’t kiss or hug them
(5) you’re supposed to / you should shake hands with them
(6) It’s important to come back home by 10:00 p.m.
4. 成篇章
Dear Mark,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’re supposed to lay them on your plate or bowl. It’s polite to accept it when the host adds food to your plate or bowl. Don’t point at anyone with your chopsticks. Don’t make any noise when you eat your soup.
In our house, you’re supposed to speak to the old people politely. When you greet the host and his other family members, you shouldn’t kiss or hug them. Instead, you’re supposed to shake hands with them. We usually do that. You should follow our customs.
When you go out with people, you should tell the host where you are going and who you are going with. It’s important to come back home by 10:00 p.m., or the host will worry about you.
Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
五、写作训练一
【参考范文】
Dear Tony、
You must be excited about coming to China soon.Now let me tell you something about Chinese customs.In China,you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. If you are invited by a Chinese family, it is good to bring a small gift, such as some flowers or fruit. But it is impolite to give a clock as a gift since it is considered unlucky in Chinese culture.When you are eating at the table,it is impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. You aren't supposed to point at anyone with your chopsticks as well. After dinner,it is also necessary to say thanks.The Chinese are very friendly to guests. I hope you can have a good time here.
Yours,
Wei Qiang
六、写作训练二
【参考范文】
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to China! Before you come, you should know about table manners in our country. Here is some advice.
If you're invited to a dinner, there will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses. You may find it difficult to use chopsticks if you haven't tried before. It's a good idea to get some practice before you come. When the food is served, you should wait until you're invited to eat. The plates will be placed in the middle of the table for everyone to share. Take a little of everything and then have some more of the things you like. During the meal, you should say how much you like it because it takes much time to prepare it.
I hope this is helpful. E-mail me if you have any other questions.
Yours,
Wang Jie
七、写作训练三
【参考范文】
Dear Dale,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce some Chinese customs to you.
In China, when we meet others for the first time, we usually say “Hello” and shake hands. We don’t hug or kiss each other. When visitors come to our homes, we always serve some fruit and offer some tea. But it’s not polite to pour too much or too little tea into the cup. When we accept gifts, we must use both hands to take them. And we usually say “It’s unnecessary” before finally accepting a gift to show politeness. If we are invited to a party, we are supposed to arrive on time.
Anyhow, different cultures have different customs. Could you please tell me some customs in your country?
Yours,
Li Hua
更多资料添加微信号:DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺:优尖升教育 网址: