专题13 九全Unit13写作主题：保护环境（人教版）.docx

更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址： 人教版九全册Unit 13 We are trying to save the earth 写作主题：Protecting the environment(保护环境） 一、 话题分析 本单元话题是“Protecting the environment(保护环境）”，主要讨论各种污染及其解决办法。环境保护是一个热门话题。与环保相关的书面表达通常是先列举环境中出现的某一现象，然后要求考生就该现象进行描述，提出建议，阐述自己的观点。具体来讲，此话题主要会从以下四方面进行设题：(1)记叙你参加过的一次环保活动；(2)谈论保护环境的重要性；(3)对保护环境的措施和建议；(4)对环境污染的看法并提岀保护环境的措施。 二、 写作方法 “三层次分析法”写“环保类作文” 1. 描述现状，提出问题 2. 指出解决途径 3. 发表感谢建议 三、素材积累 作文常用词汇和语块： “环保类”作文常用词汇： protect, litter, advantage, cost, plastic, law, play a part, cut down, make a difference, be harmful to, endangered, the number of, take part in, take action, set up, throw away, turn off “环保类”作文常用句型： 1. As a... , it's our duty to... 2. It's better for us to... 3. In this way, we can... 4. Firstly, .. .Secondly, . . .Thirdly,... 5. In a word,... 6.I believe we can make our world a better place if we... 写作句型 【开头句】 1．It is very important to take care of our environment． 2．It's our duty to protect the environment． 3．As we all know，water is very important to human beings． 4．As middle school students，we should take some useful measures to stop pollution． 5．Today environmental problems have drawn people's attention． 6. We need to protect Earth because it is our home. 7. Save the earth, Our Only Home. 8. Earth is our home. 9. Environmental problems directly affect the quality of people’s lives. 10. The most important question in the world today is pollution. 【中间句】 1．We can begin with small things，such as planting more trees，riding bikes instead of driving． 2．Sort out your rubbish into plastic，paper and rubber． 3．Set up a recycling network to encourage people to recycle the e－waste． 4．First of all，we can ride a bike or walk to school to reduce air pollu5．We'd better plant as many trees as possible to make our city more beautiful． 5．We'd better plant as many trees as possible to make our city more beautiful． 6．We should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping． 7．We can call on the people around us to do some small things to protect the environment． 8．The government should make some laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into the river． 9．Last but not least，everyone should realize the seriousness of e－waste． 10. So I hope all the students in our class stop using the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. 11. We should stop factories from producing harmful gases. 12. If we go on polluting the earth, it won’t be fit for us to live in. 13. It not only disturbs others but also does great harm to people’s hearing. 14. That’s a problem we Chinese must pay special attention to. 15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. 16. The development of private cars has brought about a series of problems. 【结尾句】 1．All in all，everyone should make a contribution to protecting the environment． 2．If everyone tries his best to protect the environment，our city/world will become nicer and cleaner! 3．We all need a healthy and clean environment．Let's repeat the three things every day：reduce，reuse and recycle． 4．In a word，everyone can do something to make a difference． 5．If all of us can do a little thing to protect the environment，I'm sure it will make a big difference． 6. None of us likes pollution. 7. I believe we can make our earth a better place to live in. 8. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things. 9. If everyone makes contributions to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful. 10. Let’s do our best to make it more beautiful. 11. Let’s take action and be a green person! 【谚语俗语】 1．Save water，waste of shame．节约用水，浪费可耻。 2．Don't let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth．不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。 3．Sharing the same sky，a total of a soil retaining．同顶一片蓝天，共护一方水土。 4．Mother nature is good，also cold butcher．大自然是善良的慈母，同时也是冷酷的屠夫。 四．【实例讲解】 【写作任务】(Section B 3a & 3b) 假如你是来自美国Westtown School的Alex，现在在太原某中学做交换生。你很喜欢这座城市，但最近发现该市存在一些环境问题。请你给市长先生写一封信，简要分析造成这些问题的原因并提出你自己的建议。 【思路点拨】 1. 定基调 体裁：应用文(书信)；信的主体部分为说明文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称和第三人称 2. 谋布局、写句子 3. 巧衔接 在连句成篇时，要将存在的两个环境问题串联起来，可以使用表示列举顺序的词first和second。 4. 成篇章 Dear Mr. Mayor, I'm from Westtown School in the USA. I came to Taiyuan as an exchange student. I like this city, but the environment around here is getting worse and worse _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. I hope the environment in your city gets better and better. Yours sincerely, Alex 五、写作训练一 地球是生命的摇篮，离开她我们将无法生存。然而，随着社会的快速发展，人类为了满足自己日益增长的物质生活需求，正一步步摧毁我们的家园。我们必须面对现实，采取行动保护环境。请写一篇题为“Let’s protect the environment!”的宣传稿，呼吁广大师生保护环境，并张贴在你校英语宣传栏内。 提示：1. 减少使用塑料制品；2. 绿色出行；3. 治理垃圾； 4. …… (至少补充一种方法) 要求：1. 内容须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 逻辑合理，语言得体； 3. 词数：90左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总 词数。 参考词汇：垃圾桶 rubbish bin；分类 sort Let’s protect the environment! Hello, everyone! Today there is more and more pollution and the environment is becoming worse and worse. So we have to do something to protect the environment. Here are some ways.                                                                                ___________________________                                                                                ___________________ __________________________________________________________________________  I believe if everyone makes an effort, the environment will become better and better. 六、写作训练二 假如你是李华，今天你班召开了“敬畏自然，保护野生动物”的主题班会，此次活动让你认识到保护野生动物的重要性。班会后，你打算写一份英文倡议书投给你校英文校报， 以此号召全校同学行动起来，为保护野生动物而努力。 要求： 1．内容须包括图示中的所有要点和一个补充要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3．词数不少于100，倡议书的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             七、写作训练三 下周的英语主题班会将围绕“家庭环保活动”这一话题展开。请你根据下面的要点提示写—篇短文，谈谈在日常生活中你和你的家人是如何做到绿色环保、低碳生活的，然后和大家分享。 要点提示： 1．绿色出行；2．节约用电；3．…… 要求： 1．内容应包括所有的要点提示，可适当增加一些细节，以使行文连贯； 2．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3．词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             人教版九全册Unit 13 We are trying to save the earth 写作主题：Protecting the environment(保护环境） 实例讲解 【参考范文】 2. 谋布局、写句子 (1) There is white pollution everywhere in the city (2) People throw them away after only using them once (3) I think that people should try to use their own cups, lunch boxes and chopsticks instead of disposable things (4) That's because there are more and more cars on the road (5) People should use public transportation more (6) It's a good idea to take buses and use shared bikes 4. 成篇章 Dear Mr. Mayor, I'm from Westtown School in the USA. I came to Taiyuan as an exchange student. I like this city, but the environment around here is getting worse and worse. First, there is white pollution everywhere in the city. People use too many disposable things, such as plastic cups, bottles, bags and lunch boxes. People throw them away after only using them once. I think that people should try to use their own cups, lunch boxes and chopsticks instead of disposable things. Second, there has been haze in the city in recent years. That's because there are more and more cars on the road and they give off too much waste gas. People should use public transportation more. It's a good idea to take buses and use shared bikes. I think the government should encourage more people to use new energy vehicles. I hope the environment in your city gets better and better. Yours sincerely, Alex 五、写作训练一 【参考范文】 Let’s protect the environment! Hello, everyone! Today there is more and more pollution and the environment is becoming worse and worse. So we have to do something to protect the environment. Here are some ways. First, we should try our best to reduce the use of plastics. For example, we should use a cloth bag or a basket while shopping. Second, we can go to school or work on foot or by bus instead of taking a car. This can not only protect the environment, but also be good for our health. Third, we shouldn’t drop litter anywhere. We should put it into the rubbish bin. Also, we should sort the rubbish and recycle it. Fourth, we should put up notices to advise others to protect the environment. I believe if everyone makes an effort, the environment will become better and better. 六、 写作训练二 【参考范文】 Dear fellow students， Wild animals are our friends．We live on the same earth．So protecting them is protecting ourselves．Nowadays many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction，and it is imperative to protect wild animals． The cause of the endangered species of wild animals are various，such as the destruction of the forests，the pollution of the environment，the mass killing of human being，etc． In order to protect our resources of ecology，measures for the protection of wild animals should be taken．First of all，pollution standards should be made to keep down poisons．In addition，it is prohib