专题12 九全Unit12写作主题：过去突发事件（人教版）.docx

更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址： 人教版九全册Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected 写作主题：叙述过去突发的事件 一、 话题分析 本单元的写作话题是“叙述过去突发的事件”。主要谈论在过去发生的令人意外的事情，此话题涉及的内容较多,可以叙述发生在自己身上的事,也可以叙述自己看到的事情。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点: 1.能够正确使用一般过去时和过去完成时叙述自己的亲身经历; 2.能够适当表达自己的感受和发表相应的观点; 3.能够掌握不同文体的写作格式。 二、写作方法 “两态一线法”写“过去发生的事件类”作文 “两态”指写作时主要运用两种时态：一般过去时和过去完成时 “一线”指以发生在过去的事情为主线 三、素材积累 作文常用词汇和语块： 【常用词汇】 unexpected 出乎意料的;始料不及的 oversleep 睡过头;睡得太久 alive 活着的;有生气的 till/until 到;直到 embarrassed 窘迫的;害羞的 embarrassing 使人害羞的;使人难堪的 believable 可相信的;可信任的 disappear 消失;不见 show up 赶到;露面 go off ( 闹钟 )发出响声 turn into ( 使 )变成;( 使 )成为 by the time...在……以前 by the end of...到( 某时间点 )以前 【常用句型】 When Sally arrived at school,she found she had forgotten to bring her math homework. He said that we did a good thing and encouraged all the students to learn from us. What an unlucky thing! By the time I got there,my classmates had already... At that time I suddenly realized that I had... We soon decided to... I was about to...when... After we had finished it,we began to... 四、实例讲解 【写作任务】 (Section B 3a & 3b) 请以“My lucky day”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你经历过的幸运的一天，讲讲那天都发生了些什么事情，然后给某中学生英文杂志的“Your Voices”专栏投稿。 【思路点拨】 1. 定基调       体裁：记叙文          时态：过去时态          人称：第一人称和第三人称 2. 谋布局、写句子 3. 巧衔接 在连句成篇时，前后句之间有因果关系，可以用because或so来连接。 此外，在阐述经历时，本文使用了表示时间顺序的表达 (如When I woke up that morning ..., Later that day ..., After that ... 和That night ...) 将几件幸运的事情串联起来，这样做使得上下文之间联系更紧密，文章的脉络更清晰。 4. 成篇章 My lucky day                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              _____________________________________________________________________ 七、写作训练一 同学们，还记得曾经令你觉得尴尬、倒霉、沮丧的一天吗？请你根据以下提示内容，以“What an Unforgettable Day”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文，叙述这段经历及当时的感受。不可逐字逐句翻译。 提示：1.上个暑假我去看望爷爷奶奶，要去火车站时发现手机和身份证落在床上； 2．到火车站晚了两个小时； 3．在候车室等车时，钱包被偷了； 4．在警察的帮助下到了爷爷奶奶家； 5．感受。 【谋篇布局】 本次写作任务要求叙述过去发生的事情。根据写作要求和内容，可分三段：第一段写事件发生的原因及时间，第二段叙述经过，第三段写自己的感想。 【思路点拨】 第一步　写作提纲 主题 An unforgettable day 内容 When ※last summer vacation What happened ※had ____ my ID card and mobile phone on the bed； ※had ______ ______ the station two hours late； ※my wallet had _____ ______； ※got to my grandparents' home ______ _____ _____ of the police Feeling ※a lesson to me； ※should keep a kind heart，______ the society isn't good enough 目的 Narrate past events 主要人称：第一人称； 主要时态：一般过去时、过去完成时 第二步　遣词造句 1．当凯特带着这个坏消息回来的时候，我们正打算动身。 We _____ just _____ ____ set off when Kate returned with the bad news. 2．成百上千的人聚集在那里，难以置信地看着它。 Hundreds of people have gathered to watch it _____ _____. 3．他觉得在战争中幸存下来很幸运。 He _____ _____ to have survived the war. 4．多么尴尬的购物经历啊！ ____ ______ ______ shopping experience! 【句型拓展】 1．It will be one of the most unforgettable journeys in your life.它将会是你生命中最难忘的旅程之一。 2．Life lies in movement.生命在于运动。 3．Anything worth doing is worth doing well. 任何值得做的事情都值得用心去做。 4．Compared with last year，we have made more achievements this year. 同去年相比，我们今年取得了更大的成就。 六、写作训练二 【典型例题】 人的一生中总会遇到一些意想不到的事情,或惊喜,或惊吓。请以“An Unexpected Experience”为题写一篇英语短文,向校英文报投稿,叙述一件你曾经经历过的意想不到的事情。 【审题思路】 1.审人称:题目要求叙述一件自己经历过的意想不到的事情,应用第一人称叙述。 2.审时态:题目要求叙述曾经的经历,所以文章时态以过去时为主。 3.注意事项: ( 1 )选取具有代表性的事件; ( 2 )交代事件发生的起因或背景,突出事件的偶然性和特殊性; ( 3 )文章应条理清晰,事件的叙述要完整。 【写作提纲】 1.引出事件,交代事件发生的时间、地点等:I want to tell you something that... 2.详细描述自己是如何应对这一偶然事件的:I had never realized... 3.自己的感悟:It’s a really unexpected experience...                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             七、写作训练三 假如你是刘洁,今天倒霉的事情接二连三地让你撞上,使你很烦心,因此你想向你的加拿大笔友Alice诉说。请你根据以下提示给Alice发一封电子邮件说说你的倒霉事。 提示:1.发生了哪些倒霉的事; 2.结果如何; 3.你的感受。 要点:1.词数80~100( 格式、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数 ); 2.邮件需包括上述要点,可适当增加细节。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             人教版九全册Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected 写作主题：叙述过去突发的事件 实例讲解 【参考范文】 2. 谋布局、写句子 (1) I was about to go to the bus station to take the bus to school when my uncle called me up (2) My uncle said (that) he could give me a lift in his car (3) I realized (that) I had left my wallet at home (4) I had / ate a free lunch (5) I got the highest score in the math exam (6) they promised me that they would buy a bike for me as a prize 4. 成篇章 My lucky day I will always remember the date September 14th, 2016. This was the luckiest day of my life. When I woke up that morning, it was raining. I was about to go to the bus station to take the bus to school when my uncle called me up. He said he could give me a lift. Later that day, I realized I had left my wallet at home and couldn't buy lunch. My best friend Lisa said she could share her lunch with me, so I had a free lunch. After that, I was praised by my math teacher because I got the highest score in the math exam. I couldn't believe that I did so well, and neither could my parents. That night they were so happy that they promised me that they would buy a bike for me as a prize. I think that was the best day I'd had in a long time. What a lucky day! 五、写作训练一 【参考范文】 What an Unforgettable Day Last summer vacation I decided to visit my grandparents because I hadn't seen them for many years. That day when I was about to leave for the train station，I found I had left my ID card and mobile phone on the bed.After I got to the train station，I found I had arrived at the station two hours late.While I was waiting in the waiting room，a woman came and asked me if I could help her look after her two boys for a while.I agreed and we played games until the woman came back.After they left，I found my wallet had been stolen.I called the police right away.They told me that the woman had cheated me.That made me really disappointed and worried.Finally，I got to my grandparents' home with the help of the police. It is a lesson to me.But I think we still should keep a kind heart. 六、写作训练二 【参考范文】 An Unexpected Experience Life is full of the unexpected.Here I want to tell you something that I’ve ever experienced. I used to be a shy girl and was afraid to speak in front of many people.Last year,my school held a speech competition.The headmaster asked each class to choose two students to take part in it.Before the teacher spoke out my name,I had never realized I would be the lucky girl. How unexpected it was!The teacher encouraged me a lot.With the help of my teacher,I did well in the speech competition.Since then,I’ve become an active and confident girl.It’s a really unexpected experience.I will never forget it! 七、写作训练三 【参考范文】 Dear Alice, I really had a bad day today! This morning my alarm clock went off as usual.I thought it was the weekend.So I turned off and went back to sleep.I woke up two hours later.But when I opened my eyes and saw my sports bag,I remembered I had planned to go running with Mary.In fact it was a school day today!So I rushed to school.Unluckily,I fell over and hurt my knees,so I had to walk to school slowly. But by the time I got to school,the math test during the first class was over.I was punished and had to copy the whole paper.I felt upset.  What a bad day! Yours, Liu Jie 更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址：