专题7 九全Unit 7 写作主题：谈论规则（人教版）.docx

更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址： 人教版九全册Unit 6 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. 写作主题：谈论规则 一、 话题分析 本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家庭的各种规章制度进行了论述。在本单元话题作文的命题过程中，命题人通常会让你就学校或家庭的某些规章制度谈一谈自己的看法。写作时多用第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时，表达观点时要有理有据，不能偏激。 二、 写作方法 “三步法”写谈论规则、闸述观点类的作文。 1．确定主题：引出要谈论的话题； 2．谈论规则：具体哪方面的规则； 3．阐述观点：赞成或者不赞成。 三、素材积累 写作此类话题作文，谈论规则、阐述观点类作文常用句型： 1. Are you allowed to make your own decisions at home？ 2. Teenagers often think they should be allowed to practice their hobbies as much as they want. 3. I think I should be allowed to decide for myself.　 4. He needs to spend more time on his homework because it is difficult to become a professional sports star.1. 5. I think I should be allowed to make this choice myself. 6. Only then will I have a chance to achieve my dream. 7. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all problems can be solved in the end. 8. Mobile phones should be kept off during the meeting 9. Teenagers under eighteen must not be allowed to smoke or drink. 10. Many parents think going to school must be put first, so teenagers should not be encouraged to work part-time. There are many rules at my home/in our school. 11. We are not allowed to do ... 12.. We must/have to... 13.Whoever breaks the rules will be punished. 14. Everyone must follow the rules. 15.I agree/disagree ... because ... 16.I think teenagers should be allowed to … 　17. I agree that… 18.I don’t agree with… 　四、写作训练一 　【写作任务】(Section B 3a & 3b) 每个家庭都有自己的家规，好的家规有利于孩子的成长、家庭的和睦。你不同意你家家规中的哪一条？为什么不同意？你认为这条家规应该如何改？请你就这三个问题在你的日记本中倾吐自己的心声。 【思路点拨】 1. 定基调 体裁：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文         时态：一般现在时       人称：以第一人称为主 2. 谋布局、写句子 3. 巧衔接 在由“为什么不同意这条家规”过渡到“应该如何改这条家规”时，可以使用表示推论的词for these reasons等来起承上启下的作用，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式进行衔接的一种方法。 4. 成篇章 Monday, September 17th _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 化“平凡”为“非凡” It’s not good to spend all the time studying. → All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 五、 写作训练二 戴维很不开心，因为他家里有许多家规。下面表格中列举了戴维家的一些规定。假设你是戴维，描述一下你家的规定，并表达你对家规的一些看法 家规 1． 不允许戴维在上学日的晚上外出； 2．不允许戴维每天看电视； 3．不允许戴维参加课外活动；....... 看法或观点 1．发表你对家规的看法或观点； 2．针对某条具体家规提出你的不同意见 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六、 写作训练三 假设你是珍妮，这周末，你们学校组织同学们去动物园参观，但是同学们对动物园的规则一无所知。请你根据表格提示写一篇关于动物园规则的作文，让同学们了解动物园的规章制度。 可以做 不可以做 1．可以拍照； 2．可以近距离观赏动物。 1．不要大声喧哗，以免动物受到惊吓； 2．拍照时不要使用闪光灯； 3．不要给动物喂食或者摸动物。 要求：（1）可适当地增加细节，以使作文连贯；（2）词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、 写作训练三 升入九年级之后，你的学习压力越来越大，你有没有和父母就周末能否外出产生争执？请根据表格中所给的信息，写一篇英语短文。 父母的观点 你的观点 在家复习功课 放松自己 好好休息 …… 帮助父母做家务 …… 　　要求： 1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数：100词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 人教版九全册Unit 6 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. 写作主题：谈论规则 写作训练一 答案 谋布局、写句子 (1) using it will get in the way of my study (2) First, the mobile phone provides me with an easy and fast way of communication (3) Second, the mobile phone can help me study / help with my study (4) I think I should be allowed to have a mobile phone (5) I can do even better in my study if I’m allowed to have a mobile phone 4. 成篇章 Monday, September 17th One of the rules in my family is that I’m not allowed to have a mobile phone. My parents think that using it will get in the way of my study, but I don’t agree with them.   First, the mobile phone provides me with an easy and fast way of communication. If I have a mobile phone, I can make a call when in an emergency. Second, the mobile phone can help me study. Now there are lots of educational apps on it that I can use. Third, I can use the mobile phone to listen to music, play games or watch movies. It’s not good to spend all the time studying. I need to relax sometimes. For these reasons, I think I should be allowed to have a mobile phone. My parents can make rules about using it, for example, when and how long I can use it. I can do even better in my study if I’m allowed to have a mobile phone. I hope my parents will understand me. 【典型例题】 　　国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多的规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一两条校规或校纪，并谈一下自己的看法。 　　【优秀范文】 　　There are many rules in our school. 　　At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I?think young people should?look smart, so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should?be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy. 　　Although we have different views on the rules, I?think everyone should obey the school rules. 写作训练二 My name is David. I have a lot of rules at my home. Here are some of them. I am neither allowed to go out on school nights nor to watch TV every day. What's more, my parents don't allow me to take part in after-school activities.There are also some other rules.For example, I am not allowed to study with my classmates after school. I am very unhappy because some of the rules are a little strict. I think I should be allowed to study with my classmates. Studying with them makes me feel relaxed and I can also learn from them. 写作训练三 Hello, everyone! This weekend, we will take a trip to the zoo. So today I want to introduce some rules in the zoo to you. There are too many animals in the zoo, so you are not allowed to talk loudly. This will frighten the animals. You can take photos of the animals, but the flash can't be used. You can watch the animals close, but the animals mustn't be fed by you, because the animals must be given special food to eat. Besides, you can't touch the animals, for they may hurt you. These rules are very important in keeping you safe in the zoo. So everyone, please follow these rules when you visit the zoo. 写作训练四 I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I stepped into Grade 9. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons. Teenagers should also have enough time to have a good rest on weekends. Also，teenagers are supposed to help their parents do some housework. In my opinion，we teenagers need to go out with our friends for fun_ so that we can relax ourselves after a busy week. And we can share ideas with each other. What's more，we can also take some _exercise together to keep healthy. So I think teenagers should be allowed to go out on weekends. 更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址：