专题14书面表达专练（解析版）（人教版）.docx

更多资料添加微信号：DEM2008 淘宝搜索店铺：优尖升教育 网址： 八年级下学期期末重难知识点串讲+精练 专题14 书面表达专练 一、同步作文 1．良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯？请根据以下内容提示，以“How to develop a good habit”为题，用英语写一篇短文，可以适当发挥。 要点：1. 坚持锻炼，不要熬夜，睡眠充足； 2. 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品； 3. 努力学习，广泛阅读； 4. 体贴父母，多做家务； …… 注意：要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不需逐条翻译；短文不少于80词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】高分范文： How to develop a good habit It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, it is a good habit to keep exercising and get enough sleep. Remember not to stay up late. What’s more, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to study hard and read some books to get more knowledge. We should also care for parents and help them do more housework in our spare time. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. I hope everyone can keep healthy and strong. 【解析】 【详解】 1、题干解读：题目要求根据以下提示内容，以“How to develop a good habit”为题，写一篇短文，包括锻炼、饮食、学习、家庭生活等方面的内容，可适当发挥。 2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍怎样养成一个好习惯时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 2．假如你是Jack，你班打算本周日在人民广场举办一次义卖活动来帮助那些有需要的同学。请你用英语写一篇短文，说明此活动的相关内容，并谈谈你的想法。 提示： 1. 义卖旧书和旧衣物等； 2. 还有一场歌舞表演； 3. 邀请老师和家长参加。要求：80词左右，可适当增加细节。 提示词：People’s Square人民广场     charity sale义卖 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I’m Jack. To help some students in need and cheer them up, my classmates and I are going to have a charity sale at People’s Square this Sunday. We will sell some old books and old clothes. We hope to buy some school things for some poor students with the money. There will be a song and dance performance, too. It’ll be exciting. We’d like to invite our teachers and parents to come. We think the activity will be interesting and meaningful. 【解析】 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给内容写一篇关于本周日举办义卖活动的作文。 2.写作指导。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；人称以第一人称为主。文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题，准确使用一定的语法，词汇和短语句型。注意不要遗漏要点，逻辑清晰。 3．假如某报社正在以“We should do chores at home”为题进行征文比赛，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文参加比赛，可适当发挥。 提示：1.许多学生不愿意做家务，他们认为做家务是父母的工作，而且做家务浪费他们的时间；2.列举你常做的家务；3.你自己的内心体会。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 We should do chores at home Now many students don’t like doing chores at home. Some students think it’s the parents’ job to do chores at home and that doing chores is a waste of their time. But I think we should help do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and often tired after work. I often do chores at home, like making the bed, watering flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and so on. In my opinion, doing chores is relaxing. And it feels great to help my parents. 【解析】 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据“We should do chores at home”为题进行写作，需要根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文来参加比赛。 2.写作指导：本文应采用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，文章开篇需先点明主题：许多学生不愿意做家务；接着阐述理由；然后表达自己的观点，并说明自己的具体行动；最后陈述自己的心得体会。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次分明，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表达符合语法的结构，词汇拼写准确，词汇、句式要丰富多样。最后要细心检查，确保正确无误。 4．假设你是Gina的笔友Alice，读完Gina的来信后，请给她写一封回信。要求：不少于80词。 Dear Alice, I have some problems. I need your help. I think I’m very shy and that I can’t get on well with my classmates. But I really want to be popular at school. Besides, I want to join a guitar club, but I don’t have enough money to buy a guitar. Now I’m upset. Could you give me some advice? Yours, Gina ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】高分范文 Dear Gina, I am sorry to hear that you have some problems. I hope I can help you. In order to be popular at school, maybe you should try to be more outgoing. How about joining some clubs and helping others when they’re in trouble? You could also take part in after-school activities. If you don’t have enough money to buy a guitar, why not borrow some money from your friends? I’m sure they will help you. I hope that my advice can help you. Yours, Alice 【解析】 【详解】 1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据Gina的来信中提到的“害羞而不能和同学友好相处”等问题，给她回信，针对这些问题提一些建议。 2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文；写作时，可以交替使用一些提建议的句型：How about...；Why not...；You should...等来给文章增色；写作时要符合书信格式，介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 5．假如你是林海，昨天下午5点，你在上学回家的路上目睹了一场可怕的交通事故。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，描述事故的经过。可适当发挥。 Weather Snowy What happened A red car ran fast and hit a big tree. What you did Called the police. What you learned from it … _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: It was snowing heavily at 5 o’clock yesterday afternoon. At that time, I was on the way home from school. Suddenly, a red car appeared at a street corner. It was running very fast, and the road was icy. Unluckily, it hit a big tree. The driver tried to get out of the car, but he couldn’t open the door of the car. Seeing that, I called the police for help at once. A few minutes later, some policemen came and saved the driver. I think drivers should always drive carefully and that they should be more careful on snowy days. 【解析】 【分析】 【详解】 1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据题干信息和表格提示的要点，写一篇短文描述路上目睹的事故经过，属于给材料作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应该用第三人称，以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，以第一人称和一般现在时为辅进行叙述。写作中紧扣要点提示，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和主要经过，最后写一下感想。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 6．同学们，你们一定听过《守株待兔》这则故事吧。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍一下这则故事。 提示: —位农夫在田里干活的时候看到一只野兔撞在了树桩上； 2. 农夫把野兔拿回家，做了一顿美餐；3. 之后，农夫每天都守在树桩旁，希望能再次碰到撞死的野兔。 提示词： hare 野兔；tree stump 树桩；by accident 偶然；run into 遇到；撞到 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Once upon a time, there was a farmer. One day, while he was working on the farm. He saw a hare ran into a ties stump by accident and died. The farmer took the hare home and cooked a delicious meal for himself, That night, he thought, “I don’t have to work so hard. All I have to do is wait for a hare every day by the tree stump.” So from then on. He gave up farming, and waited by the tree stump. But just from then on, he never saw another hare run into the tree stump. This story tells us we will get nothing unless we work hard. Remember: No pain. No gain. 【解析】 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍《守株待兔》这则寓言故事。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。按照提示内容，讲述这个寓言故事，在最后一段发表自己的哲理感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 7．由于人类大量砍伐树木、猎杀动物，地球上的动植物越来越少，有些动植物正面临着灭绝的危险。请你写一篇不少于80词的发言稿，呼吁人们保护动植物。 提示词：fur皮毛   bone骨头 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】高分范文 Hello, everyone! As we all know, plants and animals are very important to us. Plants can make the air fresher. They can also keep the beauty of nature. Animals are our friends. They are an important part of nature. But now people are cutting down trees for wood and killing animals for their fur, meat or bones. Some kinds of plants and animals are becoming fewer and fewer. They are really in danger now. We share the world with plants and animals. So we should try our best to protect them. 【解析】 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿，来呼吁人们保护动植物，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。 2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，