牛津上海版小学英语六年级上册期末专项复习：书面表达.doc

淘宝唯一店铺：知二教育 牛津上海版（深圳用）小学英语六年级上册期末专项复习：书面表达 一、书面表达（共6题） 1.请根据提示，以“My last summer holiday”为题，写一篇有关你去年暑假生活的短文。至少5句话。 提示：1）How was your last summer holiday?2）Where did you go?21·cn·jy·com 3）How did you go there?4）How long did you stay"there?5）What did you do there?www.21-cn- My last summer holiday 2.根据资料卡的内容介绍下面这种濒危动物的相关信息以及我们应该如何保护这种动物。 Name：Yangtze alligator(扬子鳄) Live in：The Changjiang River Food：birds, frogs, mice and so on Number in the past：Many Number now：About 130 in the wild What can we do to help them? Keep the water clean. Don't hunt them for food. 3.现在Peter在度假，他给他的朋友Joe写了一张明信片，请你帮他把内容补充完整。 Hi Joe,     I am in ________ now. I visited ________. ________ ________ ________     How is your holiday? ________ 21世纪教育网版权所有 4.简单描述一下你上周末的饮食情况，并对健康的饮食习惯提出四个以上的建议。60字左右。 参考词汇：breakfast，lunch，dinner, habits，should，vegetables，fruit，cola，chocolate… 21教育网 5.让我们为保护地球保护环境做点什么吧！写一写   Let's protect the Earth and the environment．People need to breath the fresh air．What should we do? These are the things we must do          2·1·c·n·j·y 6.以“My neighbour”为题，写一写自己的邻居。要求语句通顺，书写规范，不少于七句话。 答案解析部分 一、书面表达 1.     My last summer holiday     I was very happy during my last summer holiday. My parents and I went to Hangzhou. We went there by train. It was an interesting journey. We stay in Hangzhou for a week. We visited many beautiful places there. We were very happy.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】 解：这是一篇命题作文。 写作步骤： 1. 根据题目，介绍去年暑假的生活，时态要以过去时为主。 2. 提示问题有：1. 你去年暑假过得怎么样？ 2. 你去了哪里？3. 你如何到达那里？4. 你在那里待了多长时间？5. 你在那里做了什么？  围绕这些问题进行叙述。 3. 可能用到的单词或短语有： happy “高兴的”， went to Hangzhou “去了杭州”， by train “乘火车”， for a week “一周”， visited many beautiful places  “游览了许多漂亮的地方”等。 4. 根据提示，写出句子，完成短文。 21·世纪*教育网 【点评】这是考查综合知识运用的题目。要熟练掌握所学的句型，短语和语法知识。 2.     Yangtze alligator live in the Changjiang River. They eat birds, frogs, mice and so on. There were many Yangtze alligator in the past, but now there are about 130 in the wild. We should protect them. We should keep the water clean. Don't hunt them for food any more. 2-1-c-n-j-y 解：这是一篇小作文。 写作步骤： 1. 首先仔细审题，读懂题目所给信息。动物名称：扬子鳄；生活区域：长江；食物：鸟，青蛙，老鼠等等；过去数量：很多；现在数量：野生数量大约130头；我们如何保护它们？ 保持喝水清洁；不要猎食。 2. 根据所给提示，首先介绍扬子鳄，然后提出保护措施，号召大家都来保护，可以适当发挥。可能用到的句型有There be“某地有某物”句型，We should... （我们应该）等。 21*cnjy*com 【点评】这是考查知识综合运用的题目。一定要注意所给信息中的要点，写作要有顺序。 3.Beijing；my uncle；I went there by plane.；I went to the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square and The Palace Museum.；I enjoyed my summer holiday.；Peter 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】 解：这是一篇应用文，作文要求是：Peter给他的朋友Joe写了一张明信片。时态需要一般过去时，可分为三段，第一部分称呼已给，因此只要完成中间内容及落款即可。描述在北京in Beijing，visit sb探望某人，去的交通方式by plane，去参观的地方 the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square and The Palace Museum。落款是Peter。 【点评】考查写明信片，格式清晰，内容简单清楚，时态正确。【出处：21教育名师】 4.    Look at food I had last weekend. I had a healthy habit.I had vegetables ,cola and bread for breakfast. I had vegetables and fruit for lunch.I had chocolate,chicken and rice for dinner last weekend. You should eat much fish or meat in the morning.You should drink much milk in the morning,too.And you should eat many vegetables and fruit in the evening.You should not drink much cola or chocolate... 【版权所有：21教育】 解：同学要根据上周末所吃食物的金字塔图片来表达全文食物的内容。描写上周末的三餐要使用一般过去时来表达。之后建议要使用You should 句型来展开。 【点评】全文主要描写了两部分。一部分以一般过去时来展开上周末的食物。另一部分给出建议。运用了I had...和You should...句型来表达。21教育名师原创作品 5.      Let's protect the Earth and the environment．People need to breath the fresh air．What should we do? These are the things we must do.                               1.We should  stop  cutting down trees. 2.We should use less plastic bags.  3.We should walk and ride a bike more often. 4.We shouldn't litter everywhere.  ​Let's plant more trees to save the earth.Trees are important to our life. 21*cnjy*com 解：这是一篇议论文。 写写我们我们为保护地球保护环境应该做的事情。 【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关的短语、单词和句型等，注意词的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题，语言表达准确精炼。 6. My neighbour     I have a good neighbour. His name is Li Ming. He is a junior high school student. He is 15 years old. He likes playing football and doing kung fu. I sometimes play football with him. There was a football match in our school last weekend. We were the winners. We were very 解：中文翻译；我有一个好邻居。他叫李明。他是一名初中生。他十五岁了。他喜欢踢足球和练功夫。我有时和他一起踢足球。上周末我们学校就行了一场足球赛。我们是获胜者。我们非常兴奋。 【点评】本题考查的是学生综合运用英语的能力，通过课内学习，能够运用所学单词和句子来简单描述自己的学校。需要学生有一定的语言积累。www-2-1-cnjy-com 淘宝唯一店铺：知二教育