2023学年中考英语优秀范文赏析.docx

英语优秀范文赏析 一.父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出（不计入总词数）。 提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东 西，如领带等： 2. 还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情，如为父亲准备一杯茶 等他下班后饮用等。 Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.  If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do.For example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it. No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your  father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so? 二.请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日； 2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚； 3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友（friends and relatives）; 4.孩子们喜欢春节。 The Spring Festival The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.  People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.  Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play. Most of all, they can get lucky money from elders. 三.假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。 提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发。 3. 爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢 琴、看书和散步。 3.性格：以前外向；现在有些内向。 要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥； 2.层次清晰，语言流畅； 3.80词左右。 Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.  She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.   I think people can change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time. 四.随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。 优点 1.       足不出户；节约时间；避免劳累。 2.       价格通常比较便宜。 3.       可供选择的范围广，品种多。 缺点 1.       只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。 2.       容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。 注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面； 2.90词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of students also join the group.  Shopping online has many advantages. You can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more kindss of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online. 五.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。 要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题； 2.你对这些问题的看法； 3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。 How to keep a good relationship with parents In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future. In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework. 六．今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下： 1. 表述你与母亲间的情感； 2. 为母亲制作一张卡片； 3. 帮助母亲做点事； 4. 陪母亲散步等。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear John, It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner. I’m sure she’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing  from you.   Yours, Li Hua 七．假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。 提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物； 2. 礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸 （wrapping paper）； 3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。 要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚； 2.80词左右。（信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Linda:  I am glad to give you advice on the customs o