2023学年中考英语作文热点素材范文10二胎政策.docx

热点10 二胎政策 二胎政策无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的影响。今天，选择的2023年年中考英语写作预测话题是：二胎政策。 【预测题目】 （一） 最近，社会上在热议已由全国人大立法通过的新的国家计划生育政策，即俗称的 “二孩政策”（second-child policy）。假设学校本周“英语角”将以此为话题展开讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文作为讨论稿，阐述你的观点。 要求：1. 词数80—100左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 表明你的观点（赞同或反对），至少说明两点理由。 3. 语句连贯，语法正确，书写工整。 Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.___________ 【参考范文】 Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child. Some students object to the new policy. They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents. And they will not get what they want so easily as before. The little sister or brother may also affect present quiet life, even the study. Some students say they welcome the new policy. They think it will give more happiness to the family. There will be more people to communicate with and more brothers or sisters to look after the old of the family. I agree on the second opinion. And I can’t wait for a new baby in my family. I believe he or she can bring many surprises to us. 【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。 写作亮点：章结构完整，表达清晰，用了很多比较复杂的词汇和句子。例如：They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents;They think it will give more happiness to the family.使文章结构更清晰明了。 （二） 假如你是学生王俊, 在家是独生子女, 国家开放二胎政策后, 你的父母想再生一个孩子, 征求你的意见, 恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的二胎政策, 你给他回一封信, 内容要点如下:1.简单解释国家二胎政策；2.得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；3.征求Peter的看法。 注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已给出，不计入总字数。 Dear Peter, I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.__________________ Yours, Wang Jun 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China. The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with. I have to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems? What’s your opinion about this? I am looking forward to your early reply. 【解析】 1、题干解读：题干要求给你的美国笔友回一封关于我国的二胎政策的信，信的内容要包括所给的要点以及peter的看法。 2、例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要以一般现在时为主；例文详细的介绍了我国的二胎正常和Peter的看法；结构清晰；逻辑性强。 3、高分亮点： 短语：plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly。 句型：The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children；what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child。 【点睛】 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如plan to do；give birth to；share with；make a decision to do sth；most importantly等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 （一） 国家现在放开了二胎政策，很多人认为有一个兄弟姐妹很好，你认为呢？根据提示写一篇短文。 1.父母要花费更多时间和金钱，两个孩子会生气打闹； 2.有玩伴，不孤独，学会照顾别人，学会分享等； 3.…… 注意：1.词数：80词左右； 2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3.文中不出现真实姓名、校名和地名； 4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 I am the only child in my family. I get everything I want. If I have a sister or brother,___________________