2023学年中考英语作文热点素材范文16与父母相处.docx

热点16 与父母相处 与父母相处无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它给我们的生活带来很大的影响。今天，选择的2023年年中考英语写作预测话题是：与父母相处。 【预测题目】 （一） 根据要求完成作文，词数：80—100词。 假如你的邻居李涛即将升入初中，他很想了解一下初中的学习和生活，请你给他写封信谈一谈，包括以下内容并适当发挥。不得出现真实姓名。 （1）学习方法上建议。 （2）与老师同学融洽相处。 （3）与父母之间的沟通。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Li Tao, I’m glad to share something with you. I think it’s the most important to listen to the teachers carefully in class. It’s not necessary to do too many exercises. We should try to find the right method to solve them. We can collect the problems we haven’t worked out correctly. Go over them at times. The harder you work，the better grades you will get. We should get on well with our teachers and class to keep us happy. Try to be more active and help each other. We’d better not argue with our parents when we’re in disagreement. Have a talk with them. We should help them do housework after school. Don’t spend too much time on the Internet. It’s not good for our health. Good luck! 【解析】 试题分析：这是个给材料作文。提示中已经给出了作文的写作要点。在写作时，注意将要点理清，不要遗漏。在整理文章的结构后，用正确的语言把意思表述清楚。文章可使用一般现在时，并且注意主谓一致。句子之间可适当的使用连词，使文章逻辑更紧密。 写作亮点：短文叙述清楚，层次分明：第一点是关于学习方法上建议；第二点介绍如何与老师同学相处，最后介绍如何处理与父母之间的关系。The harder you work，the better grades you will get. We’d better not argue with our parents when we’re in disagreement.都是比较经典的句子。 （二） 你的好朋友Linda， 现在面临很多压力，爸爸妈妈总是把她与其他同学相比较，因此她最近心情很不好。请你给她写一封信，建议她1.与父母好好沟通，2.通过做运动，听音乐等方式学会放松。 要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，2. 70词左右。 Notes： compare with 与...相比较； learn to relax 学会放松； get on well with 与...相处融洽；in a bad mood 心情不好； pressure；stress压力。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Hi! Linda, I am sorry to hear that you are stressed out these days and your parents often compare you with your classmate. I have the same problems as yours. I am very sad,too! But I know my parents want me to study harder and get better grades so they are strict with me. So I communicate with them. And now I understand them and they understand me. So you can try to communicate with your parents. Or you can listen to some quiet music and watch some games to relax yourself. And I hope you will become happy later! 【解析】 试题分析：根据题目要求可知，本文主要以第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态，在写作时可适当使用一些连接词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑。要注意把每个要点都表达出来，不可遗漏任何一个。 写作亮点：本文首先对朋友的烦恼表示同情，同时说出自己也有类似的烦恼，并讲述自己解决的一些方法。符合本题要求及要点提示。同时，本文中多次使用连词如and、or、so为文章增色不少。 （一） 在微信上，Jack 跟Bruce谈到他跟父母关系不好，并向Bruce寻求帮助。假设你是Bruce，请根据下面的提示，给Jack回复信息。 要求： 1) 必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥(至少两点)； 2) 词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 内容提示： 现象 我过去经常跟父母吵架，有时几天不说话。 原因 父母过分担心我的成绩，给我太大的压力。我不帮父母做家务，也没有意识到帮父母的重要性。相反地，我每天花至少两个小时玩电脑游戏。 措施 现在我能和父母相处得好。我认为我们该和父母沟通。…… Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parent either. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you. 【参考范文】 Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parents, either. I used to argue with my parents, sometimes we didn’t say a word for a few days. Because my parents really worried about my grades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn’t help them do any housework, because I didn’t think it was important to do housework. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day. But now I can get on well with my parents. I think we should often communic