2023学年中考英语作文热点素材范文12梦想.docx

热点12 梦想 中国梦无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的思想带来了极大的影响。今天，选择的2023年年中考英语写作预测话题是：梦想。 【预测题目】 （一） 某杂志正在征集文章, 主题为《中国梦, 我的梦》。每个平凡中国人的梦想汇聚成中国梦, 中国梦的实现在于我们努力实现各自的梦想。你的梦想是什么?你打算怎样实现?你的梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献, 能使祖国发生怎样的变化? 请你以《中国梦, 我的梦》为题, 写写自己的梦想、计划以及将来祖国的变化（如环境、教育、科技、生活等方面）。 要求：1. 词数80词左右, 至少使用两处比较级； 2. 不得出现真实的姓名或校名。 China's Dream, My Dream ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 China's Dream, My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I will try my best to study hard .I want to let every student study happily. Now our rivers are cleaner than before. We have our own cars in almost every family and our lives are better than before. It is convenient for us to go out every day. Now we also learn in more ways, we can learn knowledge on the Internet, videos and so on. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better. 【解析】 1.题干解读：该题目要求包含梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化?等，注意要有比较级的运用，对于比较级的相关用法要熟悉。 2.例文点评：例文通过对梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。 3.高分亮点：词组：try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等； 句型：I will try my best to study hard. /Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go out every day ./For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. /I think life in our country is getting better and better. 【点睛】 首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 （二） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Tim 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你给他 回复电子邮件，主要内容包括： 1. 你的梦想是什么； 2. 你为这个梦想做过什么； 3. 为实现梦想你还需要怎样努力。 要求： 1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 2. 词数不少于 80 词。 Dear Tim, How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Tim, How’s it going? As we all know, it’s important for us to have dreams. My dream is to be a doctor because a doctor can cure people and even save people’s life. I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student. I often went to the local hospital to see what doctors were doing on weekends. Sometimes I even played games about being doctors and patients. Not only was it interesting but also was educative. However, I will try my best to be admitted by my ideal medical university. In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor. Only in this way can I realize my dream better.Look forward to hearing from you. 【解析】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你的美国朋友 Tim 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你以李华身份给他回复电子邮件，首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去和一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：save people’s life.；a middle school student；the local hospital；on weekends.；try one’s best to do sth.。 句型：In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor.；Only in this way can I realize my dream better. ；Look forward to hearing from you. （一） 现在许多人在讨论“中国梦”（the Chinese dream），我们的祖国如何早日梦想成真，这需要我们每个中国人的努力，因为我们每个人的小梦想是中国梦的一部分。 请以My Dream为题，谈谈你的梦想。 提示：1、你的梦想是什么？ 2、 你为什么有这样的梦想？ 3、你打算怎样实现你的梦想？ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________