2023学年中考英语作文热点素材范文13降.docx

热点13 健康 健康无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它时刻影响着我们的生活。今天，选择的2023年年中考英语写作预测话题是：健康。 【预测题目】 （一） 8月8日是“全民健身日”，人们越来越关注健康，作为中学生，你是如何保持健康的，请你用英语写一篇80词以上的短文。 内容要求：1. 谈谈健康的重要性； 2. 如何保持健康(包括饮食、运动与生活方式等)； 3. 为保持身体健康，你常作哪些运动。 注 意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 In my opinion, keeping healthy is important for our life. Good health also helps us to study better. So we should look after our health. There are many ways to keep healthy. First, we should have a healthy lifestyle and eat a balanced diet. It’s good for us to eat healthy food instead of junk food. Sleep is also important. We will feel active and energetic when we have enough sleep. Then doing sports is also good for health. To be healthy, I often do exercise. I play basketball after school every day and go swimming twice a week. Staying in good health makes me happy and energetic. To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot 【解析】 试题分析：首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，要介绍健康的重要性，并提出一些保持健康的建议，全文用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。 【亮点说明】 短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如多处用到不定式表示目的To be healthy等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：First，Then等。 （二） 健康一直是人们关注的问题。请根据下表信息提示，写一篇短文。 健康的重要性 保持健康的方法 健康比金钱重要…… 健康饮食：多吃水果蔬菜；少吃油腻食物 摒弃（get rid of）不良习惯：要吃早饭；饭前洗手；早睡早起，不熬夜。 多锻炼，强身健体。 要求：把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。词数在80左右。. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Health is far more important than money. Good health can help us enjoy our life while poor health leads to illness. Firstly, we should eat healthily. It is important for us to take more fruit and vegetables. We should eat less rich food. Secondly, we have to get rid of bad habits. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning. Don’t forget to wash your hands before meals. Staying up late at night is bad for our health. It’s better for us to go to bed early and get up early. Finally, we’d better take enough exercise to make our bodies strong. 【解析】 试题分析：本文要求根据所给中文提示语，说明健康的重要性和 保持健康的方法，如多吃水果蔬菜；少吃油腻食物；摒弃（get rid of）不良习惯：要吃早饭；饭前洗手；早睡早起，不熬夜。 多锻炼，强身健体。本文应该用一般现在时，并要正确运用与健康饮食、生活相关的词语和句式。 【亮点说明】 本文要点齐全、行文连贯、层次清楚。首先点出健康的重要性。然后用Firstly,Secondly,表达两个方面。正确运用相关的词语和句式如：It is important for us to….；get rid of bad habits；take enough exercise Staying up late at night is bad.等。 （一） 近期一项调查显示许多中学生的健康状况令人担忧,主要是不健康的生活方式引起的。请以“ healthy life”为题,撰写一篇100词以上的短文。 要求: 1.谈谈自己的生活方式或习惯是否健康。 2.分享一下你认为的健康生活方式。 3.倡导中学应该健康生活。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Healthy Life Health is important to everyone. If we want to live a happy and healthy life, we need to keep a healthy lifestyle. I think my lifestyle is not good because I often eat some junk food and I seldom do exercise. What does a healthy lifestyle look like? Frist of all, we need enough sleep. Every day we should sleep for at least eight hours. Sleeping very late is bad for health, so we had better go to bed before ten o 'clock at night. Secondly, it is also important to eat enough vegetables and fruits every day. There is a saying: an apple a day keeps a doctor away, so it's good to have some fruits every day. Also, we need to drink enough water. To sum up, we should keep a healthy life style. I wish everybody can have a healthy body. 【解析】 题干解读