2023学年新教材高中英语Unit1Foodforthought单元写作练习外研版必修第二册.doc

单元写作 如何保持健康 假设你是李华，针对目前中学生存在的不良饮食习惯，你们学校将举行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题的演讲比赛，请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿。 注意：开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat.Therefore, it's very important for us to develop healthy eating habits.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ That's all.Thank you! 步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻是前提 一、审题 1．确定体裁：本文为演讲稿。 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一、第三人称。 3．确定时态：以一般现在时为主。 二、构思 第一段：说明健康饮食的重要性以及目前存在的问题。 第二段：列举应该如何健康饮食。 第三段：发表个人观点。 步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全 1.important 重要的 mon 普遍的，共同的 3.habit 习惯 4.breakfast 早餐 5.particular 挑剔的 6.harm 害处 7.various 各种各样的 8.include 包括 9.strong 强壮的 10.energy 精力 步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现 1.众所周知，食物塑造了我们。(表语从句) As_we_all_know,_we_are_what_we_eat. 2.对于我们来说养成健康的饮食习惯是非常重要的。(it作形式主语) It's_very_important_for_us_to_develop_healthy_eating_habits. 3.不良的饮食习惯在我们学生中仍然很常见。(同位语结构) Bad_eating_habits_are_still_very_common_among_us__students. 4.我们中的一些人经常不吃早餐就上学。(without结构) Some_of_us_often_go_to_school_without_breakfast. 5.所有这些坏习惯肯定会损害我们的健康。(主谓宾结构) All_these_bad_habits_will_surely_do_harm_to_our__health. 6.为了保持健康，我们应该有各种各样的健康饮食。(不定式短语作目的状语) To_keep_fit,_we_should_have_various_healthy_diets. 7.健康饮食通常包括适量的鱼、肉、蔬菜、水果以及主食。(主谓宾结构) Healthy_diets_generally_include_proper_amounts_of_fish,_meat,_vegetables,_fruit_as_well_as_main_food. 8.我们最好规律饮食。(主谓宾结构) We'd_better_have_meals_regularly. 9.我们应该努力养成健康的饮食习惯以炼就强壮的身体。(不定式短语作目的状语) We_should_try_to_develop_healthy_eating_habits_to___build_up_a_strong_body. 10.只有这样我们才能有足够的精力更好地学习。(only位于句首的倒装结构) Only_in_this_way_can_we_have_enough_energy_to__study_better. 步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点 将6、7句合并为复合句 To_keep_fit,_we_should_have_various_healthy_diets,_which_generally_include_proper_amounts_of_fish,_meat,_vegetables,_fruit_as_well_as_main_food. 步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇 Dear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat.Therefore, it's very important for us to develop healthy eating habits.However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students.Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some others are particular about food...All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food.Besides, we'd better have meals regularly. In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. That's all.Thank you! - 3 -